XD Yep. Good news tho' I finished Exsohs, Li', and Nightshade.


Name) Exsohs
Age) Twenty-One Human Years
Gender) Male (I use male Horse words for him. Stallion and such)
Kin) None, unless you include Li'
Personality)
Intelligent
Exsohs was always a very intelligent creature. He would create strange Ideas for catching prey and finding dens. Others would call him a witch, but it was simply not so. He was just a very mentally gifted child. His parents did not see it that way, and soon after his eighth birthing day they left him. Exsohs survived partly because of his wit and partly because of his determination. Exsohs's intelligence was used in his murders. He knew to clean his tracks, attack the target alone, be silent deadly. No one could ever catch him. Now that Exsohs has given up his crime, and is trying to better himself he can try and use his intelligence for good. But the results are unknown, as of now.
Guilty
Because of his past the stallion is feels all his decisions are the wrong ones. Exsohs often feels an overwhelming sense of guilt if someone gets hurt under his choices or even if something goes wrong. Thus he hates being in charge and will do almost anything to follow, not lead.
Paranoid
Exsohs has never exactly been a sweetheart. From a young age his whole mindset has been turned to everything being a challenge towards him. His abandonment, no family. With that having been forced into his mind he snaps at just about anyone (except Li') and will fight to the death in order to prove himself to anyone. While his heart is in the right place his mindset is not. He has been trying desperately to fix this factor of his personality however it has had very little success thus far. He isn't exactly sure who is friend or foe in his life. He doesn't know who is going to use him and who is going to truly become a good friend to him and so he simply doesn't trust anyone. Getting Exsohs to trust you just might be the hardest thing you do in your life.
History)
“But don't you see! I can't change! No one can.”
~
Rain pounded down. Thump Thump Thump Even though our cave was protected I was freezing, even my tail blaze was cold. Where were they? My parents had left at Sun-High. Or was it Sun-Dip? My stomach ached with hunger. They had been gone five days now, no matter what I told myself I knew somewhere deep down that they had abandoned me.
“Why Li'?” Li's small body was curled against my tail. His normal playfulness had left days ago.
“Don't know Amili.”
I shuttered. “There not coming back.” It was a question and a statement.
“Yep.”
My chest heaved, sobs where coming.
“Now, now Exsohs I'm still here.”
Yes Li' was still here, but for how long? His ribs showed through his thick fur, I'm sure I looked worse. “I'm going out. We've got to get food.” Before he could argue I was out the den, my wobbly foal legs buckling. My tail was raised, adopting the hunting position. This was insane! I had never hunted before! I was only eight! I was so tired, tired of struggling. My tail dropped to the ground, its tail-blade sinking in the muck. Where were my parents? Why had they left? I knew I wasn't perfect, but to leave me to die? My legs buckled again, this time I didn't struggle to my hooves. I lay still for the longest while, growing cold. Remembering six days ago.

“Look at him! He will not survive the winter!” My mother's voice echoed through the cave, did she really think what she said? Li' was asleep, and I was thankful. His parents were my parent's Slmorthri, 'Lifelong Adviser' in my language. It was custom, that the parent's Slmorthri's children became the parent's childrens' Slmorthri. I stared at her “lifelong Adviser”, she was Li's mother how could she not say anything? My father said nothing in my defense. I burned with rage. How dare they! Just because I was smaller than an average yearling didn't mean that I would die! My back legs unsheathed their claws. Well! They didn't want me I didn't want them!

Oh, how I wanted them now. The rain pitter-ed down.
Minuets, hours, days. The mud had covered me.
Sudden movement! With an energy I didn't know I had I gave chase, the animal had no chance. I connored it, my tail iched for the kill, I was waiting for something. There. A sent in the air, of fear. It was perfect, to die for. The creature stared at me, it's black eyes wide with terror. Faster than the eye could see I struck. The deer fell.
So this was death.
And that was fear.
~
Exsohs was a disappointment in many ways. He was not large, not brave, disappointing. His parents disliked him, and his strange ways of understanding things. He spoke strangely, had knowledge of the stars, there were whispers he was a witch. When he was eight Exsohs's parents left, his mother expecting another child. The foal abandoned, his only companion Li'.

He suffered for many days before venturing out of the cave, making his first kill and forgetting his past. The male traveled away from his home, working odd jobs. Assassination. Li' had much to say about Exsohs's doings but couldn't bring himself to correct the parent-less boy.
It was new-leaf when it happened.

Exsohs took a job, to kill Sxsohs. Unknown to him, she was his sister. The sibling who his parents left him for. Day before the event. Exsohs was doing research on his target, he learns of her parents. Full of furry, the stallion leaves its the night of the kill, it was to happen like all the others. Into the den, flashing of the tail-blade forget the event, eventually. But Exsohs didn't want it to happen like all the others. He went in the cave, corrected her. Introduced himself. Terrorized her until she begged for death. It was better than all the others, he should of left. But he searched the cave. It was like the others, until it wasn't.

There was a foal.

No one was to blame but himself, he left the foal and its Lifelong Adviser. It might survive. Exsohs acted like he was unfazed but Li' knew better. See, Exsohs remembered himself. He remembered his horror of being abandoned, and whether your parents were killed or whether they left, the feeling of abandonment is the same.

Exsohs was a changed creature, he tried to be good. But inside he knows he can never atone for his sins.
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I typed his history myself! Seriously. XD

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That...looks amazing....omg....IT SOUNDS TERRIBLE AND AWESOME AND WOAAAAHH ALL AT ONCE!!

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Thanks Cinder Blaze. I was thinking how could Exsohs be dangerous yet feel guilty? It was like Assassin! XD

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Man, Exsohs looks SOOO good!

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LOL! That's great dude. XD You might want to alter the history though and explain how the sister died, and then maybe sayyyyy.....WHAT HAPPENED TO HIS NEPHEW/NIECE?? I WANT TO KNOW SO BADLY XDD

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XD I don't know! Exsohs survived when he was eight... so lets see 10 years lets say 5 years of being good... 13. The foal would probably be about one... It probably would not of survived. :C

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YOU BUTT HOLE. :(

Also, his little sister....if he was eight when abandoned, wouldnt she have been less than 5? Why would she have a foal, why would she be on his target list, and why would such a kid know about STUFF LIKE THAT, like "SPARE ME, I BEG YOU"

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Edited his age... She would be 13.... Uggg, reading that part I might have to change somethings... Xd

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Yeeeeeeehhhh.... XD <3 SILLY SAV <3 :p

I want to like....proofread your history....but im afraid ill fry it XD

FYI, in case you didnt know, severe OCD. Those short simple sentences in the suspense murder his own sister paragraph are killing me. ^_^

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You can fry it, I don't care XD

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Okie :3 to do list for

Tuesday or ASAP

RP when logging in
Feed/Play
Lupus-Chita species thread
Fry Sav's history (but not really ;) )

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Changed a bit. Exsohs is presently twenty-one. 6 when he was abandoned. His sister would be fifteen when he was commissioned. The foal would be around one.


History)
“But don't you see! I can't change! No one can.”
~
Rain pounded down. Thump Thump Thump Even though our cave was protected I was freezing, even my tail blaze was cold. Where were they? My parents had left at Sun-High. Or was it Sun-Dip? My stomach ached with hunger. They had been gone five days now, no matter what I told myself I knew somewhere deep down that they had abandoned me.
“Why Li'?” Li's small body was curled against my tail. His normal playfulness had left days ago.
“Don't know Amili.”
I shuttered. “There not coming back.” It was a question and a statement.
“Yep.”
My chest heaved, sobs where coming.
“Now, now Exsohs I'm still here.”
Yes Li' was still here, but for how long? His ribs showed through his thick fur, I'm sure I looked worse. “I'm going out. We've got to get food.” Before he could argue I was out the den, my wobbly foal legs buckling. My tail was raised, adopting the hunting position. This was insane! I had never hunted before! I was only eight! I was so tired, tired of struggling.

My tail dropped to the ground, its tail-blade sinking in the muck. Where were my parents? Why had they left? I knew I wasn't perfect, but to leave me to die? My legs buckled again, this time I didn't struggle to my hooves. I lay still for the longest while, growing cold. Remembering six days ago.

“Look at him! He will not survive the winter!” My mother's voice echoed through the cave, did she really think what she said? Li' was asleep, and I was thankful. His parents were my parent's Slmorthri, 'Lifelong Adviser' in my language. It was custom, that the parent's Slmorthri's children became the parent's childrens' Slmorthri. I stared at her “lifelong Adviser”, she was Li's mother how could she not say anything? My father said nothing in my defense. I burned with rage. How dare they! Just because I was smaller than an average yearling didn't mean that I would die! My back legs unsheathed their claws. Well! They didn't want me I didn't want them!

Oh, how I wanted them now. The rain pitter-ed down.
Minuets, hours, days. The mud had covered me.
Sudden movement! With an energy I didn't know I had I gave chase, the animal had no chance. I connored it, my tail iched for the kill, I was waiting for something. There. A sent in the air, of fear. It was perfect, to die for. The creature stared at me, it's black eyes wide with terror. Faster than the eye could see I struck. The deer fell.
So this was death.
And that was fear.
~
Exsohs was a disappointment in many ways. He was not large, not brave, disappointing. His parents disliked him, and his strange ways of understanding things. He spoke strangely, had knowledge of the stars, there were whispers he was a witch. But it was simply not so. When he was six Exsohs's parents left, his mother expecting another child. The foal abandoned, his only companion Li'.

He suffered for many days before venturing out of the cave, making his first kill and forgetting his past. The male traveled away from his home, working odd jobs. Assassination. Li' had much to say about Exsohs's doings but couldn't bring himself to correct the parent-less boy.

It was new-leaf when it happened. Exsohs took a job. It was strange, the commissioner came to him in the night; hooded. She seemed to be female, but Exsohs couldn't grasp why she wanted the fifteen year-old mare dead. Sxsohs, was the mare, and unknown to him she was the sibling who his parents left him for, his sister. Day before the event. Exsohs was doing research on his target and the circumstances of her strange ordered death, he learned of her parents. Full of fury, the stallion left, its the night of the kill, it was to happen like all the others. Into the den, flashing of the tail-blade forget the event, eventually.

But Exsohs didn't want it to happen like all the others. He went in the cave, cornered her. Introduced himself, " You don't know who I am, but I sure know you.". She was strangely brave, but Exsohs terrorized her until she begged for death. It was better than all the others, he should of left when he was ahead, but he searched the cave. It was like the others, until it wasn't.

There was a foal.

No one was to blame but himself, he left the foal and its Lifelong Adviser. It might survive. Exsohs acted like he was unfazed but Li' knew better. See, Exsohs remembered himself. He remembered his horror of being abandoned, and whether your parents were killed or whether they left, the feeling of abandonment is the same.
Exsohs was a changed creature, he tried to be good. But inside he knows he can never atone for his sins.
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Annnnd Frost's done!


Name) Frostbite
Age) 7 Dragon Years (16 human Years)
Gender) Female
Kin & Species) Dead, unless you include Landslide & NightWing X IceWing Hybrid
Personality)
Pain is not a weakness of the body, but one of the mind. My mind is not weak.
~
Frostbite, being a hybrid, has health problems. She does not have frostbreath or fire, well she has frostbreath but can not use it because of the body warmth that keeps all fire breathing dragon's alive. She sometimes gets racking pain from her chest, because of the ice and fire raging war there, but Frostbite being Frostbite doesn't admit to being ill.

Speak freely? Last time I spoke my mind my mother was gutted.
~
The she-dragon has trust issues, Frostbite has never exactly been a sweetheart. From a young age her whole mindset has been turned to everything being a challenge towards he. Her health, her heritage, her mothers death. With that, a sense of paranoia has been forced into her mind and she snaps at just about anyone and will fight to the death in order to prove herself. While Frostbite heart is in the right place his mindset is not. She isn't exactly sure who is friend or foe in her life. And she doesn't know who is going to use her and who is going to truly become a good friend to her and so being so she simply doesn't trust anyone. Getting Frostbite to trust you just might be the hardest thing you do in your life.

Tag along if you want, Mudwing, see if I care
~
Poor Landslide, Frostbite isn't a very nice dragon. She never gives complements, and rather insults those around her. Like most of her tribe she looks down at all dragons that are not IceWings, but she holds NightWings even higher than IceWings. The she-dragon hardly accepts anyone, you have to work exceptionally hard to prove yourself.


History)
“Look at me! The body Of an IceWing, the scales of a Nightwing! No one accepts me! Unless I make them.”
~
My talons left long groves in the side ice of the Ice Place. An Amuis had wasted her talents on beauty.
Pity.
But wasted magic wasn't why I had returned from my exile. I had returned despite Queen Freeze's orders.
When she banished me, as if that wasn't a punishment enough, she had literally raked her claws down my heart. “Your a shame to the royal line! You are no longer welcome in the Ice kingdom!”
Well that amuis cursed spawn of a RainWing! I snarled I would show her. I snarled again, there were guards up ahead and I really didn't want to kill anyone but the queen.
“F-F-F----Frost Bite!” One of the Guards stammered out.
A fifth circle. Figures. “ Yes? That is me, unless There are more 'shames to the royal line'” I glared at him.
“Your not supposed to b—b---be here.”
I rolled my eyes. “And your going to stop me?”
His eyes looked around, his partner reached for a spear.... I leaped, my talons ripped his chest open. Gutted like a fish. I stepped away, the guard had never reached for the spear but if he had lived a while longer he might have. A gift of Prophecy. I stared at the reaming guard. The stuttering one, I repeated my question.
“N-nnnn—nnn-no!” He stepped aside.
I curved my lips upward in a show of appreciation. I swear he almost fainted.
I stepped inside the Ice Palace. Home at last. I paused thinking, what I was planing was an Assassination. I began to walk again. It was justice. There is no difference between justice and revenge. What better way of revenge was there than ripping the throats out of the queen's daughters, sisters, and finally her? The queen had killed my mother! Her sister. How dare she. It wasn't mother's fault she had fallen in love with a NightWing. For three years mother had hidden her secret. Her death was my fault. If I hadn't told those worthless worms about my father...
It didn't matter.
I would kill the Queen of the Icewings.
I would set things right.
~
Frostbite was born to an IceWing mother and a NightWing father. She is in-fact a hybrid, and to make matters worse Frostbite's mother is the IceWing's Queen. Snowfall, Frostbite's Mother and the Queen's sister, was a prisoner's of the NightWing's. During her time in the Rainforest she fell in love with a NightWing, Fatechanger. When the IceWing's finally were able to barder Snowfall's safe return she was already with-egg. When Frostbite's egg was laid, Snowfall lied about how Frostbite came to be. The ebony egg turned silver in the full moon.

The IceWing's trusted her, after all who can trust those evil NightWings?

So Frostbite was born, the young dragonet yearned to find her place in the Icy kingdom, with only the friendship of her mother. Snowfall told Frostbite wonderful stories: about the Rain-forest half a continent away and about a father she never knew.
And to make matters worse the, youngster was hiding a life-changing secret. She had inherited from her father a gift of prophecy, she could make choices and mentally see their outcomes.
Her mothers stories helped the young dragon fit in with the other young IceWings. She repeated her mother's stories, and the IceWing Dragonet's slowly begin to accept the strange misfit. But then a slip of the tongue.

She told of her Father.

The queen, Frostbite's Aunt, seized Snowfall and killed her. The now motherless Frostbite was banished from the Ice Kingdom. The dragonet swore her revenge, and one day she delivered. Using her gifts she avoided capute, and slaughtered most of the royal family as they slept, only leaving her youngest cousin alive so the whole kingdom wouldn't fall apart.
Frostbite, now four, struck out on her own, unsure what to do with herself. She traveled the different tribes, seeing how all dragons are different but how she related to all of them. She stayed away from the rain-forest and the NightWings, not waiting to explain her life to her father.
He last Stop was the Mud Kindom, where she found Landslide close to death. She saved him, and although sometimes she wouldn't admit it she has grown fond of him. The duo have been together ever since, Frostbite sees Landslide as the brother she never had; nothing more.


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Omg...ok...time to make a WoF rp and just have WoF oc's on the run. PLease? Sav lets do ittttt

NightWing born under three moons, in the rainforest. The problem was...she shows no sign of any powers. On her first birthday, however, she was caught by her mother, Wisdomseeker (modified name of cannon nightwing...wasnt sure what to do with her parents XD), levitating objects in her family's hut in the NightWing camp (gotta read to be more term specific XD FIX THIS LATER). She is named Forestgiver, given to her (hahaaaa...) as the first 'TRUE' nightwing dragonet born in the rainforest - as her mother sees Moonwatcher as inferior and a fake nightwing. Forestgiver is five and a half now, and wishes to leave the rainforest to do something that hasnt been done yet, she's excited and wishes to adventure on her own or in a group. Despite her mother's views on the RainWings inferiority to NightWings, as 'proven' by their powers when born under the moon, Forestgiver has no such qualms with other dragon races, and is a mild-tempered, normally gentle dragon. She does, however, have moments of unknown bias, growing up with Pro-NightWings surrounding her and usually peaceful RainWings, she has a lot of misguided knowledge about the history of Pyrrhia.

*will add more later....busy busy busyyyy......*

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see name please!!!

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