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Posted by | Artist Critique Wanted! (Finished Piece) |
![]() Vanii [Main] (#36229) ![]() UwU View Forum Posts ![]() Posted on 2015-03-11 04:57:43 |
I Don't Usually Ask for Critique, But I Love this drawing Idea so Much. That I want it to be perfect before I start making the Line Art. Please be Nice when Critiquing :) ![]() ![]() ![]() Edited on 12/03/15 by Furry (#36229) |
Vanii [Main] (#36229)
![]() UwU View Forum Posts ![]() Posted on 2015-03-11 04:57:59 |
If you're Curious on who this Character is. It is my OC Fawn. She is Meeting her Saluki Form which I just recently fell in love with. Also It would be helpful if you guys can link me anatomy tips on Hooves and Paws cause I suck at them BTW , This is just the Sketch so its a pretty rough looking thing haha ![]() Edited on 11/03/15 by Furry (#36229) |
Shy (#51494)
![]() Remarkable View Forum Posts ![]() Posted on 2015-03-11 05:07:21 |
I think they look wonderful. Just one thing though a paw has four toes if you were going with realistic. But since they are mythical creatures correct? I think that three toes would be fine. ![]() |
Vanii [Main] (#36229)
![]() UwU View Forum Posts ![]() Posted on 2015-03-11 05:10:38 |
I cannot for the life of me draw another toe xD i have tried but it looks so weird to me. Im not really aimming for realistic. My style is pretty cartoony. But I just want like that legs, head, and body to look right o-o. Fawn is a Deer/mixed with I have no idea how she got a long tail. But her other form (the dog) is saluki, minus the small antlers ex: ![]() ![]() ![]() Edited on 11/03/15 by Furry (#36229) |
Mots - RP Loved🏒 (#5378)
Merciful View Forum Posts ![]() Posted on 2015-03-11 05:13:19 |
I'm pretty good at paws. I can link you some images of deer hooves if that would help. I'd say I could redline a few spots, but it's hard on traditional to redline it. ![]() |
Vanii [Main] (#36229)
![]() UwU View Forum Posts ![]() Posted on 2015-03-11 05:15:30 |
I would appreciate the links Motsumi!, Ill post a link of the line art when I line it digitally later on today if I feel like the sketch is nice x) :0 at least hopefully I get to it today. ![]() |
Virus [Message #275] -(CCC) (#123) ![]() Pervert View Forum Posts ![]() Posted on 2015-03-11 05:15:46 |
Shy (#51494)
![]() Remarkable View Forum Posts ![]() Posted on 2015-03-11 05:17:32 |
I do okay with paws but I am mostly a realism portrait artist. But my main strength is eyes and face detail. So I am not the best person to as on paws and hooves and such. ![]() |
bucky barnes {1032/3000} (#48555) Fearsome View Forum Posts ![]() Posted on 2015-03-11 05:24:29 |
ButtBoss (#51717)
Famous View Forum Posts ![]() Posted on 2015-03-11 05:28:24 |
![]() ![]() Since the other one is a saluki, would you like her to look more dog like or the way she does currently? She red more deer/dog hybrid than just dog, but if that is what you were going for then you did a great job :D ![]() Edited on 11/03/15 by ButtBoss (#51717) |
Vanii [Main] (#36229)
![]() UwU View Forum Posts ![]() Posted on 2015-03-11 05:34:02 |
Thank you to everyone who is red lining !!! I appreciate it soo so much. @ButtBoss , you did amazing with the legs !! I really was having trouble with the other leg as you can tell from my eraser marks xD. I was trying to do what you did with her deer form (the legs in the back) but it looked crippled half the time so I tried avoiding it by extending it xD. It looks absolutely amazing thank you. And as for her dog form. I do try really hard to make her look more like a dog (: minus the antlers ![]() Edited on 11/03/15 by Furry (#36229) |
ButtBoss (#51717)
Famous View Forum Posts ![]() Posted on 2015-03-11 05:44:30 |
![]() ![]() Made her more doggy by lengthening the muzzle, adding a stop, and defining the chest from her neck a little more. ![]() |
Shy (#51494)
![]() Remarkable View Forum Posts ![]() Posted on 2015-03-11 05:50:35 |
Wow. That looks good. Mind if I as for some critque as well on one of my Wip's? ![]() |
Vanii [Main] (#36229)
![]() UwU View Forum Posts ![]() Posted on 2015-03-11 05:57:27 |
@Boss, Hmm hmm I see what you did there. I have a problem with making dog heads round and slope down. I really need to practice on that. She looks even more Saluki than before *-* . I'll be sure to give you a shout out on my DA for helping me on the Anatomy (: @Shy, sure I don't mind (: ![]() |
Shy (#51494)
![]() Remarkable View Forum Posts ![]() Posted on 2015-03-11 06:02:06 |
Vanii [Main] (#36229)
![]() UwU View Forum Posts ![]() Posted on 2015-03-11 06:04:05 |