after finishing the Warriors series I started writing a story akin to cats living together and I want to see if anyone likes what I have so far, I want you to listen to a few notes though

Notes:
I have writers block
I can't do punctuation well
I was reading seekers when I started this and I couldn't think of a better way of inviting you to the characters
The name of the story is called Escapers: from the wild
It follows a white tiger named Vona after she is taken from her mother by Furlessers (humans) and how she meets new friends in the zoo she is taken to, she lives in said zoo for about 1 year as she is taken at 4 months and when she battles her way along with her friends to escape she is lost in the city and goes on a quest to find her mother and stay out of lines of capture so she is not taken back to the zoo

Here is what I have:

Aliengence:
Vona- White tiger with gold eyes female
Found in the wild
Stile- bangle tiger with green eyes male
Born in captivity
Orokona- Southern Chinese tiger with brown eyes female
Born in the wild but taken At a young age
Danaul- Amur tiger with grey eyes male
Born in the wild
Gelirural- Sumatran tiger with pale eyes male
Born in captivity

Other characters
Shizu- Southern Chinese tiger female
Moliou- Indo-chineese tiger male
Kiroto- Malayan tiger male
Aroso- Sumatran Tiger female
Galdo- Southern Chinese tiger female
Yosona- white tiger female

Chapter one: Kidnapped
"You will be alright sweet heart, just keep calm!" Yosona yowled , her white pelt striped in onyx fading from Vona's vision.
"Momma! Wait momma please!" Vona said back, the fur-lesser's dragged her across the forest floor and her mother, the opposite direction, she couldn't move her paws as a thick brown thing that itched was wrapped around her before she was dragged onto a cold hard grey mash in it that was lifted into a dark area that soon started to rumble and make loud noises before a loud creaking sound was herd and the monster began to move.
"Mommy? Mommy are you here?" The young white tiger roared her voice echoed around the monster but there was no response she closed her eyes and rembered her lush green forest and the clearing they made there home in, the birds that chirped in the morning telling them to wake up and when the sun fell or as momma had said it:
"when the sun was killed by the dark."
The Owls hooted all night preventing them to sleep, then the sun got revenge and killed the dark and the birds chirped again...

Vona flicked her eyes open, she was laying on dirt her white pelt turned brown and muddy and sticks of bamboo shot up around her, she was in a clearing and when she sniffed the air she smelled other tigers, her left leg hurt and she couldn't get up she blinked her golden eyes a few times and clenched her teeth when she saw a hill at the top of the hill looked like the entrance to her clearing "It's just a dream... Good" she said to herself running to the hill before hitting a flat surface and falling on her back.
"That's a wall."said a voice behind her she flipped her head round to see a Southern Chinese tiger, one that wasn't to common around her home lands but had been around.
"Have you ever seen a wall before?" The tiger asked Vona shook her head not speaking standing up she shook the dirt from her pelt.
"I'm Orokona, most of the other tigers call me Kona though!" Orokona looked at Vona and giggled "You must be new then, may I ask your name?" She asked when Vona din't respond. Vona looked at her and lifted her white paw up to her muzzle thick red blood dripped from her nose.
"You hit herself pretty hard there din't you?" Orokona said sitting by Vona.
"Vona is the name."
"Vona? That's a nice name, so the keepers found you?"
"Keepers? You mean the Furrlessers right? And I wasn't found they... They stole me!"... (TBC)

I have a few questions that need answers:
1) if I continued this would you read it?
2) I need a fake location of the zoo any ideas?
3) could you create a background character for me please I need more for both the wild and in the zoo I need name, species, personality for them
4) any ideas for the future of this story?

Lioden made background characters: