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Kaiet Cooper (#64210)

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2015-12-13 13:29:24
This is no longer a sketch but a completed example please give me help and feedback and let me know what you would pay and if youre interested in it. it took me two hours to get the facial features right so feedback would be aweseom

http://orig05.deviantart.net/b445/f/2015/349/1/3/charmer_my_lion_character_by_ghostofthewoods-d9kazpq.png



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Edited on 16/12/15 @ 00:27:19 by ArtisticUmbreon (#64210)

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Sáracen (#52208)

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Posted on
2015-12-15 17:38:40
If i was to buy art, i'd certainly look at getting a recolor of this, yes c: it's really pretty! facial features look amazing, i really like how well you managed it! the shoulders are a bit too square but that's barely noticeable xP



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possum (#77681)

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2015-12-17 14:51:27
Overall, it's quite a nice piece, and I'm sure recolors of it would sell well. I think I'd pay about 250 - 300 SB for one.

I can only think of two things you might want to work on; the sharpness of the markings and shading.

You use fairly thick, clearly defined lines, so the blurry markings seem a bit out of place. I get that you're trying to imitate fur, but I personally think that sharper markings would look better with your style.

I can't really see any shading, which makes the face less three dimensional than it could be. 

I'm not sure if you simply chose not to shade, or if you struggle with it (so please don't feel like the following advice means that I feel you're an inexperienced artist) but it's fairly simple to learn, although harder to actually apply. This tutorial ( which was not created by me) is really helpful.

Again, overall, the head shot looks good! From the chat and forums I gather you're a novice semi -realistic digital artist (which I am too! Yay! ^u^) and it's great to see you're trying to make the best art you can, and make a name for yourself in lioden's huge art community.



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Kaiet Cooper (#64210)

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2015-12-17 15:03:53
@purrfect i didnt even get a notification that you commented and thanks for the feedback its hard to get people to actually tell me what they think so appriciate it so very much ^_^



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possum (#77681)

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2015-12-17 15:08:02
You're very welcome!



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🐾 Leon (#32760)

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2015-12-17 15:10:44
I'm not great with criticism, but I would definitely buy one if I had the money! It's cute, and you seem to have the basic structure correct. The only thing I would change though is the neck. It seems a bit long when you look at where the shoulders are supposed to be. Other than that, it looks good!



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Kaiet Cooper (#64210)

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2015-12-17 15:21:13
@leon thanks for the feedback and the neck was intentional since animals have longet necks than humans



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🐾 Leon (#32760)

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2015-12-17 15:22:12
Ahh, okay! You're welcome!



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