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2016-08-23 23:42:16

This is an official clan thread for the Artists Unite! Clan!

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Welcome to Artists Unite! We are a clan dedicated to helping each other improve our art skills, whether traditional/digital.

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Edited on 20/11/17 @ 10:18:19 by OokamiRaven (#16535)

TophatCheebs (#16535)

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Posted on
2017-01-02 02:36:42
Rainy
Lots of reference pictures and years of practicing DX

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Welcome Deer!

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Vanangandr
That's a cool looking Kelpie
Oh man, I remember my art teacher, she taught everything that wasn't my art goal. She intimidated me at first but by the end of senior year I was so done with school and actually argued with her once

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Guys help me, I'm trying redraw a 2yr old drawing of a 7yr old oc and I got worse
I absolutely can't draw 7 yr olds now and I can't find any tutorials
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FlameHunter (#28212)

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2017-01-02 02:44:08
Drawings kids is a paaain. If humans weren't hard already, kids have weird proportions. Looking at images of 7 year olds, I'd say add round face, large-ish forehead, and a small nose. I have noticed that the lower that the eyes are located, the more childish it looks like. I may be wrong though, I only have a single child OC

There's also this tutorial I found.



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TophatCheebs (#16535)

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Posted on
2017-01-02 03:07:53
I 100% agree why must they be so confusing
I can only draw babies and young adults, there's not in between
I do have some child ocs but they're animals...

Aaa thank you, I'll give it a try after I get some breakfast, I guess I shouldn't draw on an empty stomach



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TophatCheebs (#16535)

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Posted on
2017-01-02 05:50:46
Okay so this is what I managed
It's super sloppy omg
The horse wasn't even suppose to be there but I'll fix it I just need critiques/tips on the kid



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Alexandoria (#80753)

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Posted on
2017-01-02 06:34:49
I really like that! ^^

His mouth and shoulders seem a bit off to me though.
I did a redline

I placed a belly button there to indicate that maybe his torso is a bit long. The shoulders slope very severely, which doesn't really happen in real life, so I did a redline there too. His mouth looks very awkward, but I'm not sure what look you were going for, so maybe look at the mouth as more of a suggestion rather than a critique.



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Semi-HIAT (#89773)

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Posted on
2017-01-02 06:37:29
Ahh sorry i havent been really talky here lol!
I finished up an entry for an art contest a couple days ago, wondering if i could get your guys' opinions on it for future note?

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Edited on 02/01/17 @ 13:37:42 by =|♞|= Jynx =|♞|= (#89773)

Alexandoria (#80753)

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Posted on
2017-01-02 06:38:32
Are you looking for crit on anything specific? ^^



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staqhound (#101191)

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Posted on
2017-01-02 06:39:56
Screen Name + ID Number: staqhound #101191
Are you a -- Learner, Mentor, Both?: Both!
Traditional or Digital Artist?: Both!
What things are you good at? (Leave blank if none): Animals especially canines!
What things do you want to improve? (Leave blank if none): I'd like to improve on fur detail and anatomy
What program/drawing tablet do you use? (Leave blank if traditional): photoshop cs6
What type of markers do you use, eg. Copics, Watercolour, pastelle, crayon: just my regular pencils, no coloring for me!



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Semi-HIAT (#89773)

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Posted on
2017-01-02 06:40:44
@Alexandoria

Just overall. Anatomy, detail, etc. To me i see almost nothing wrong with the piece- which in the past has always been a red flag for me as months later ill notice i got some things on anatomy wrong and such. So i thought id ask and see what you all notice or have to say



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Alexandoria (#80753)

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Posted on
2017-01-02 06:48:18
Okay, Jynx, I did a redline.
Redline

On the one on the left, the mouth opens too wide - This in the sense that it doesn't have a "joint"-point, where the upper and lower jaw connects, it just curves in your drawing. The rest of that is beautiful though.
On the second headshot, I just fixed the angle a little bit, because your mouth was conflicting with the snout.

On the body shot, I tried drawing the paws - You've drawn two joints in the wrist. If you think about your own arm, the joint I've put is the wrist and the individual paw is the entire hand - There's not a joint between those, if that makes sense.
I also fixed the butt a little bit, because the tail was rooted a bit high on the butt - So just move it down a little and you're good. The tail is an extension of the spine, so it starts where your butt ends, basically.



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Edited on 02/01/17 @ 13:49:03 by Alexandoria (#80753)

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Semi-HIAT (#89773)

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Posted on
2017-01-02 07:05:46
Thank you so much! Ill for sure save this redline for future reference with my art!
THis was my first time working with odd angles as i normally do straight-on or profile views, so its nice to see where i got it wrong.

and ahh i see what youre talking about with the double joint. The ref i was using made it seem like there was another one. I wont be making that mistake again in the future, thank you <3



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Alexandoria (#80753)

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Posted on
2017-01-02 07:10:16
No problem, glad I could help <3



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TophatCheebs (#16535)

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Posted on
2017-01-02 07:55:24
Thank you so much Alexandria, I fixed what you redlined
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I think it's decent enough to start its second sketch but I'll wait for more critiques, something looks wrong on the wolf but I can't tell what

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Alexandria pretty much pointed out with the redline but I think the back leg might be too long and some other parts
Here you go



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TophatCheebs (#16535)

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Posted on
2017-01-02 07:56:36
Oops also welcome staqhound!



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Alexandoria (#80753)

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Posted on
2017-01-02 07:59:14
Well fixed! ^^



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