Posted by small flavour text adjustment

Sama (Thakkadis) (#108463)

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2017-06-09 21:02:25
I just got this flavour text for one of my Graceful lionesses:
"With a graceful lope, Hyena Tooth passes you as you inspect the pride. Her rhythmic pawsteps adding to her feline gracility," and the way it's phrased is really bugging me.

Please can we get this changed to either one of these two?

"With a graceful lope, Hyena Tooth passes you as you inspect the pride. Her rhythmic pawsteps ADD to her feline gracility,"

or "With a graceful lope, Hyena Tooth passes you as you inspect the pride, her rhythmic pawsteps adding to her feline gracility?"


EDIT
Please tell me why you don't support so I can adjust the suggestion!



This suggestion has 5 supports and 3 NO supports.



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Edited on 09/06/17 @ 21:10:14 by Thakkadis/Aenthari- #CritRole) (#108463)


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