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🥝Uneven2ros (#182174)

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2019-11-04 15:45:24

This is an official clan thread for the Writers' Den Clan!

Welcome to the Writers' Den!
A place where all writers can share writings, ask for/give suggestions/criticism, or just chill out and talk!

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This clan's purpose is, of course, to create a hub where writers can thrive and share work/CONSTRUCTIVE criticism, but it also serves another purpose. I and many other writers feel that we don't get enough appreciation for our work, and we know that there are a whole lot of writers out there who are afraid to share their writing with the world. So this clan serves as a place to promote the sharing/selling of writing works, and to create a safe, calm environment for budding writers to share their work without having to worry about being judged harshly.

Rules:

-If you want to advertise your writing commissions on this thread, please PM ME, the owner of this thread (#182174)! You can absolutely advertise your stuff here for a small fee!
-NO HATE, BULLYING, OR ANY FORM OF NON-CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM. This will result in you immediately being reported and/or banned from the clan.
-Have fun! Don't be afraid to share your work with us, we don't bite!
-If you want to ask me privately about your work, PM me and I'll be happy to help you out!





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Edited on 29/11/19 @ 10:19:32 by 🥝 cool.kiwi 🥝8/50 Glass (#182174)

🍫kakawa🍫 (#184297)

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Posted on
2019-12-01 12:39:12
Guys
I need help, I'm having writers block and I havent written in a few days
Its still the same, I have an idea in my mind but idk how to write it



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Posted on
2019-12-01 12:42:55
Hi there! I often have the same issues, @cheesysheez! What I do, is I create my characters first. I figure out their strengths & weaknesses, I figure out their backstories and motivations, then I imagine how they'd best fit into the plot I've created. Approach it like you're joining a roleplay with no developed plot plan, and just figure out what you want the characters to do! In my experience, this is good for getting over block, but it may just be relative to me^^
Anyways, I wish you luck on your writing!!



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🍫kakawa🍫 (#184297)

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Posted on
2019-12-01 12:46:02
Thanks!
But heres the thing, I have EVERYTHING planned out, up until the 3rd book. And I'm currently writing a fight scene, but I have no clue on how to write it. I have drawn the characters and stuff but I'm just stuck.

Hold on I'll get a recent paragraph, I'll edit this post
Heres the paragraph;

“The second round begins!” said Larcton, he waved his free arm to the villagers, and they shouted with excitement.
The boys faced each other again, this time Stefen circled his arms and out came a flaming ball of unnatural magic. Morshaw stepped out of the way and made a sword with the charm. The sword flashed into his hand, Stefen ran at him, both of his hands were engulfed with the brown of the unnatural magic. Stefen flung out his arms and the magic flew straight at Morshaw. He used the sword to cut through one of the magic balls, but the other one hit him on the back, burning through his shirt and onto his skin. He screamed, “Damn it!” and charged at Stefen, the sword clenched with both hands. He threw the sword with full force, and before it made contact with Stefen’s face, he made a wall in front of him. Another sword flew at Stefen, then another and another. Since the magic wall Stefen made had disappeared, he had to move out of the way and dodge the swords. He looked around for his younger brother and felt a quick jolt of pain on his shoulder. Morshaw had stuck a small knife on Stefen’s shoulder, Stefen turned around, pulling off the knife and throwing it. He touched the small cut the knife had made and it immediately healed. Morshaw tried to find the knife, looking away, when Stefen raised an arm, magic made the ground raise up from under him, making Morshaw fall. He yelled and saw Stefen looking down at him, a hand near his face which was ready to fire. Morshaw was laid on his back, hands supporting him, he was panting. He looked around, then got an idea while Stefen stared at him.
Morshaw raised both of his legs, flung them around Stefen’s arm and used his upper-body strength to pull himself up.

I'm stuck on the part. Idk what to writee



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Edited on 01/12/19 @ 12:50:47 by cheesysheez (#184297)

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🥝Uneven2ros (#182174)

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Posted on
2019-12-01 16:04:02
@Cheesy Ugh, writers' block is the WORST-

I would suggest watching some movies with battle scenes in them, like maybe Avengers? Also, go for a walk, listen to music!



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2019-12-01 16:06:37
@cheesysheez If you're looking for something specific to put there, I'd suggest maybe having them do a flashback, to when they were younger, training together? That could be where Morshaw learned the move he's pulling, and you could go in either direction from there^^



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🍫kakawa🍫 (#184297)

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2019-12-01 16:49:02
@cool.kiwi, yeah that's what I'm doing! And when I listen to soundtracks of Marvel movies I get some inspiration for a scene

@pardon me, the whole intro of the book is a dream, a flashback of Morshaw when he was younger. Hes having a dream when he was a tween, and a tradition in his family was that he and his sibling would have their first spar against each other, not their fathers. And, it's how Morshaw gets a huge scar that's on his face.



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rat | bo triple
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2019-12-16 20:12:05
hey guys :) i'm really glad to see a writing thread here. any tips on how to write shy/anxious characters?



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2019-12-16 20:17:30
Can I get you guys' thoughts and opinions on this? I wrote it sometime last week.

https://www.lioden.com/topic.php?id=304429382281

No one's seemed to have read it, so- Could you guys maybe? :'3



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🍫kakawa🍫 (#184297)

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2019-12-16 20:55:56
@cherry, well if you want to write an anxious character, then have them stutter a little bit. And make them feel a bit quiet around other people. Make their dialogue limited, a few sentences. At least that's how I'd write a character like that

@ignite
Oooooooo hskdhsksks, I like that a lot. A lone king looking for a lioness but he came across another king that looks like a lioness. That's very creative and has a nice storyline.



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Edited on 16/12/19 @ 21:01:16 by cheesysheez (#184297)

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2019-12-20 11:55:22
@cheesysheez
I didn't see this until now, sorry!
Thank you! ^^ I've been thinking about making story with those two. But I am not sure yet.



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Tip (#9963)

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Posted on
2019-12-23 10:53:22
The LIoden Christmas Carol, everybody...

Hey ho, it's that time of year
When everything gets strange
When snuh is falling here in Africa...
When everything that's white
Comes out to play, and that's alright
Because the snuh is here in Africa

And every lion knows that there's no danger
When crocodiles sledge upon the ice
And you cheer Vashkartzen in his merry snowball fights
(And hope he loses too, and that's alright)
When everybody's hiding bundles in your den
Because the snuh, you see, is here again

Hey ho, it's that time of year
When everything gets strange
When snuh is falling here in Africa...
When everything that's white
Comes out to play, and that's alright
Because the snuh is here in Africa

And if you've the runs and just shit everywhere
Maybe there'll be beetles in your poop
With which to buy good things, and never mind the smell
Because they're good and shiny, so oh well...
It's that crazy time of year
Cos snuh is falling here.



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Edited on 23/12/19 @ 10:58:56 by Methos ⚔️ (#9963)

Ama (#183150)

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Posted on
2019-12-23 11:20:54
Aww, beautiful x3



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