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🥝 cool.kiwi 🥝Uneven2ros (#182174) Scourge of Lions View Forum Posts Posted on 2019-11-04 15:45:24 |
This is an official clan thread for the Writers' Den Clan! Welcome to the Writers' Den! A place where all writers can share writings, ask for/give suggestions/criticism, or just chill out and talk! This clan's purpose is, of course, to create a hub where writers can thrive and share work/CONSTRUCTIVE criticism, but it also serves another purpose. I and many other writers feel that we don't get enough appreciation for our work, and we know that there are a whole lot of writers out there who are afraid to share their writing with the world. So this clan serves as a place to promote the sharing/selling of writing works, and to create a safe, calm environment for budding writers to share their work without having to worry about being judged harshly. Rules: -If you want to advertise your writing commissions on this thread, please PM ME, the owner of this thread (#182174)! You can absolutely advertise your stuff here for a small fee! -NO HATE, BULLYING, OR ANY FORM OF NON-CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM. This will result in you immediately being reported and/or banned from the clan. -Have fun! Don't be afraid to share your work with us, we don't bite! -If you want to ask me privately about your work, PM me and I'll be happy to help you out! 0 players like this post! Like? Edited on 29/11/19 @ 10:19:32 by 🥝 cool.kiwi 🥝8/50 Glass (#182174) |
Ama (#183150)
Maneater View Forum Posts Posted on 2019-11-25 21:49:59 |
It's just strange to think that people you don't know might be reading something you wrote, and that they will likely hate it and make their feelings known xD 0 players like this post! Like? |
Pegasus Dragoness (#143822)
View Forum Posts Posted on 2019-11-25 21:55:14 |
I don't think people really hate and bash like that. If I don't like a post or piece of content, I just don't say anything and move on. I don't get very many comments on my Instagram and none on my website, but the ones I have gotten have all been good. 0 players like this post! Like? |
Ama (#183150)
Maneater View Forum Posts Posted on 2019-11-25 21:57:16 |
This makes me feel better. I'm probably just getting stuck in my own head lol 0 players like this post! Like? |
🍫kakawa🍫 (#184297)
Scourge of Lions View Forum Posts Posted on 2019-11-25 22:10:21 |
Hello! I'm a wannabe writer, and am currently writing a book series on my own. I've been working on it for 6 months I think, and have just begun writing the intro for it. It's a fantasy/action book series of 4 parts. I have the background for it already done and am now working on the offical book. If it's fine, I could post some paragraphs from what I have so far and you guys could give me your input? 0 players like this post! Like? |
Ama (#183150)
Maneater View Forum Posts Posted on 2019-11-25 22:26:57 |
🍫kakawa🍫 (#184297)
Scourge of Lions View Forum Posts Posted on 2019-11-25 22:39:07 |
Thanks Arya! I'll post some later if I can, I'm on mobile and it'll be faster on computer :) 0 players like this post! Like? |
Ama (#183150)
Maneater View Forum Posts Posted on 2019-11-25 22:39:51 |
🍫kakawa🍫 (#184297)
Scourge of Lions View Forum Posts Posted on 2019-11-25 22:45:56 |
Ama (#183150)
Maneater View Forum Posts Posted on 2019-11-25 22:46:36 |
🥝 cool.kiwi 🥝Uneven2ros (#182174) Scourge of Lions View Forum Posts Posted on 2019-11-26 06:01:07 |
@Cheesy Sorry for the late reply, but welcome to the forum! Also, I'd love to see your book series :D 0 players like this post! Like? |
xX_Assassin_Xx(side) (#187134)
View Forum Posts Posted on 2019-11-26 06:04:45 |
im not a writer but ive commisioned a few people to write a back story for apollo(my king) and they've done amazing so far 0 players like this post! Like? |
🥝 cool.kiwi 🥝Uneven2ros (#182174) Scourge of Lions View Forum Posts Posted on 2019-11-26 06:06:43 |
xX_Assassin_Xx(side) (#187134)
View Forum Posts Posted on 2019-11-26 06:23:32 |
yea i agree im trying to find someone who can do one for my new king as i am sadly retiring apollo today ;-; 0 players like this post! Like? |
🥝 cool.kiwi 🥝Uneven2ros (#182174) Scourge of Lions View Forum Posts Posted on 2019-11-26 06:24:43 |
🍫kakawa🍫 (#184297)
Scourge of Lions View Forum Posts Posted on 2019-11-26 12:51:16 |
Hi everyone! I just woke up and heres an explanation of my series. Oh, also I'm including LGBTQ+ representation in the series. And people who have albinism and vitiligo conditions. An example of LGBTQ+ rep is a polyamorous relationship of 2 woman and 1 man. An example of vitiligo is an enemy swordsman named Nuzall. The series includes tons of mythical creatures, elves, werewolves, vampires, etc. Hey it's a fantasy series :) All mythical creatures have a human form, they can switch in between forms any time. It all started 7 years ago, when Morshaw and his group stole an important ship from an infamous pirate captain, her name is Doane. Doane's crew tried to get it back but failed. For the past 7 years, Morshaw had been using the ship as their home, training a lot. They were training because they knew she was pissed that they took the ship. They know that Doane is coming, and since they eliminated most of her past crew, she has recruited more powerful people. After the battle they had, 7 years ago, Doane found out that Morshaw was harboring the runaway prince of Ozuvell. There is a bounty for him, a huge price for his safe retrieval. But he explained to Morshaw, he didnt want to go back to his parents and to his betrothed. He preferred an adventurous life instead. So now, Morshaw and his group protect him from Doane in the 1st book. After the 7 years, Morshaw and his group are now stronger, they are recruiting people to help them with their cause- protect the Prince from Doane and her crew. That was for book 1. Book 2= After Doane dies in the last battle of book 1, her daughter Krallel takes over. Her father was originally going to be captain but he couldnt take up the role so he made Krallel captain. Krallel sends Morshaw a letter, that Doane dies and the fighting should seize for a few weeks to mourn her. He agrees, showing that he was some sympathy for his enemies. After a few weeks, Krallel strikes. She sends the dragons to fire on them. Then sends an angel, Adnachiel to fight. Adnachiel gets captured then gets persuaded to join Morshaw by Drucilla. Krallel's mission is that same as her mother's, to get the prince and the ship back. Due to a major fight in book 1, Morshaw lost his right arm, Drucilla lost his left eye, the prince [REDACTED] ahaha, anyway then Jeno loses both arms, (got broken and injured badly), and lastly Asher lost both legs due to a 1v1 with a dragon, (going to be graphic in the book hshshsh). So the book starts with Morshaw, Drucilla, Jeno, Asher getting adjusted to their new prosthetics. Thankful for the few weeks to spare, they got used to their new arms, legs and eye. After they are used to it, that's when Krallel sends the dragons and the angel, at night. In the middle of the book, Krallel's half brother, Nihen makes an introduction. He's the child of Doane and a dragon, Rekso. No one knows who Nihen is, not even Krallel's father or her. Heres a paragraph, not official yet but here. "All of a sudden, there was a shout. A very loud one, it said, "Stop!" It sounded like a boy, all fighting seized. Everyone's attention was now in the direction it came from. They heard an opening noise from under the ship and saw a figure ascend. They yelled again, "Stop!" Three people ran at them and a strong magical field came from the figure, blowing then away. In the moonlight, giant horns and large wings were exposed. The figure had their hands on their chest, both facing opposite directions. The figure said, "I am Nihen." A few other things will happen, earlier. But during the reveal of Nihen, he makes Morshaw and Krallel become allies. They fight Nihen. Also the parents of Morshaw, Drucilla, the prince will be revealed. Book 3= Nihen stays in book 3 for a bit then eventually leaves. No one knows why, but he flys away after getting one of his wings nearly cut off. Few months later, after the fight with Nihen, Morshaw and Krallel are still allies. In a meeting with only the 2 of them, they decide to remain allies and help each other with anything. With that, both ships and many boats stay near each other, watching out for each other. About a year of peace later, a new enemy appears. It seems that anyone is going after the Prince of Ozuvell, and the cash reward. The enemy is a couple. 2 woman, both hybrids. But one seems...off. Turns out that shes the ONLY multi hybrid in the world. And the other hybrid, another woman, is a siren/mermaid and demon mix. The multi hybrid, says that she is part of a prophecy that states the only multi hybrid will become ruler of the world for all time. With more power, Morshaw and Krallel fight the hybrids. I'm going to leave out some details but the fight is long and dreadful. For book 4 I dont have anything planned for it. YET. I'll make another post for book 4. Thanks for reading this long post. If you have any questions, ask me! I'm always active! :) 0 players like this post! Like? |