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βοΈ I will write:
β’ almost any genre
β’ Lioden pride lore, lion biographies, etc.
β’ your own OCs
β’ descriptive & narrative writing
β’ fanfiction (fandom dependent, please ask first!)
[some examples of fandoms I will write for: TLK, Pokemon, Warrior Cats, Disney, Sonic, etc.]
β’ gore, violence, etc. as long as its not excessive
β’ dark themes
β I will not write:
β’ NSFW
(innuendo/lewd of 18+ HUMAN characters is fine; I won't do explicit sexual content or smut though!)
β’ anything politically charged, religious, or otherwise sensitive in content
β’ hateful content towards any group
β’ some particular fandoms (again, please just ask!)
β’ research papers/non-fiction writing
generally, my writing rate is 2 / 1 per 100 words.
β I may offer discounts for larger amounts, such as entire prides.
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β all prices are in GBP [£££], so please keep in mind that if you use a different currency, the price may vary a little due to currency conversion!
β see 'accepted items' at the bottom of this page to see what Lioden items I'm currently accepting as payment (and at what value)!
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the format for each category goes as follows:
commission type
recommended length (words)
price range (based on the above recommended length)
physical/appearance descriptions
200-350 words
4-7 | 2-3.50
EXAMPLE 1:
Cropped black fur forms the dark base of the tuxedo's short coat, fit upon a small, lithe body with wiry legs, giving Frostwhisper a lean, willowy frame, just like her father. White splashes create under-half white spotting around her muzzle, throat, chest and petite paws. This same white also forms a narrow stripe from the base of her jet-black charcoal nose, leading all the way up to her forehead, coming to rest between sharp, thin, triangular ears. Snow-hued speckles invade Frostwhisper's pelt due to her vitiligo, increasing in vigour as she ages, bathing her black coat in shimmering silver that brightens to creamy white. She is left with a dusting of icy spots that decorate her back and flanks.
Her front paws have mismatched dots - black on her left and white on her right - with each side inverted, trailing up from paw-pads of a matching charcoal hue to her nose. Raccoon-like bands of white and silver traverse her thin, extensive tail, a distinctive pattern that contrasts against the rest of her monochromatic coat. Long, neat whiskers are accompanied by dark freckles pinching the edges of Frostwhisper's maw, accenting her eyes, green shot with dashes of blue. Once bright and shiny, the colour has faded thanks to her disabling injury, leaving her optics clouded and completely blind. Triple lacerations have scarred over the tuxedo's face: thick, curved pink lines that make it clear her blindness was caused by a fight, despite the she-cat's soft demeanour. Smells of pine bristles and earthy tones smother the tuxedo's compacted pelt, though curiously, Frostwhisper also always carries the subtle scent of rain.
EXAMPLE 2:
Upon first laying eyes on the long-furred tom, one's first impression would be one of majesty and grace. Long plumes of soft, dark, stormy fur shine smoky hues of silvery grey in the sunlight, melting into pale russets towards the tips of his glorious mane. Feathered tufts erupt from behind Jaguar's cheeks, enveloping his neck and chest in a thick scarf of fur, only accentuating his rounded muzzle and triangular cheeks. Angular ears jutting from above two bright flaxen visionaries appear a little small in comparison to the enormity of his ruffles; the rest of his long fur shrinks in the presence of his coiffure. A jet black nose with matching charcoal paw pads pop against a silvery-blue muzzle, whiskers extending in earnest to meet the haloed edges of his pelt.
Front paws dipped in light grey ash are the only breakage in the rest of the tom's pelt, soaked in misty black, leaving his coat appearing more akin to a very dark grey, mimicking billowing smoke in the shadows of night rather than the blackened sky itself. But Jaguar's appearance holds yet another surprise: perched upon his rump are twin tassels of feathery virtue; two tails, long and winding, decorated with the same downy, gradient fur as his chest. Each individual moves synchronised with the other; though they are capable of independent action, Jaguar uses them to his advantage to heighten his natural charisma, moving hypnotically as he struts.
An imposing appearance is aided by a stature of noticeable size, though certainly not as large as the tom's ego regards him. A lengthy pelt hides a lithe build, musculature built more for speed than strength, though this is difficult to discern without peering beneath the tomcat's regal coat. Stocky enough to not appear lanky, but not broad enough to be considered a beast, Jaguar sits in the perfect middle ground, proportions mirroring a miniature-sized version of the predator he's named after.
personality blurbs
350-750 words
7-15 | 3.50-7.50
EXAMPLE:
First impressions inaugurate mixed opinions on Jadefox's nature. Whilst cordial and mature, not at all unpleasant, her aloof disposition can create an air of awkwardness, deriving from the young warrior not entirely knowing how to best navigate social situations. She is often masking her inner self, feeling shame for simply being herself around those she's unfamiliar with.
But with time brings comfort, and as Jadefox begins to shed her uneasiness around strangers, her true persona will emerge. Both intellectual and creative, the Bengal enjoys deep debates and enlightening conversations concerning both reality and myth. StarClan fascinates her, as she wouldn't be inclined to believe in such a concept if it weren't proven by the hard truth: the fact that leaders are granted nine lives. However, this has not managed to lessen her fear of death, for whether her consciousness will stay with her amongst the stars is something she cannot prove either way. In this way, Jadefox perceives the world in truths, unwilling to accept things out of sheer faith.
Once her left-minded brain has been activated, one could find themselves wrapped up in heated disputes with Jadefox if they say something she disagrees with. Opinionated and headstrong, if her barrier of social apprehension is worked past, the Bengal will challenge any views she finds unacceptable. Changing her mind is incredibly tough, as is veering her course of action, as the molly is known to be rather stubborn, believing in the validity of her own beliefs and morals. Even if they may be questionable to some.
Rebellion flows in her blood, an anarchist mindset that perhaps clashes with the general worldview of peace and order held by the Clans. That said, Jadefox will follow the Warrior Code when she can, unless she truly thinks it necessary to break. She is an incredible liar, never giving away a thing, so when she needs to get away with breaking the rules, she usually succeeds without a hitch. Sometimes these reasons can be selfish, driven by her strong emotions that often have a palpable influence on her rational thoughts. Jadefox will do her best to evenly weigh the pros and cons of any situation, and she will admit her own bias, but this is not usually enough for her to convince herself to make a different choice than the one her heart is already set upon.
Because of this empathetic knowledge of herself, the Bengal is very self-aware, which has led to an incurable cycle of self-depravation. Jadefox is very loving and affectionate to those she cares for, which means if those relationships turn sour, the molly can turn all of the blame inwards. Furthermore, she can sometimes be temperamental and emotional, swinging into negative states easily. Reverting back to her usual contented self proves difficult, which can lead to her lashing out unfairly. She will know she's in the wrong, and will apologise profusely, but she will remain unsatisfied that the situation is resolved until she feels better; usually, she just needs some time to heal. Her tendency to overthink sometimes leads to her spiralling, but soothing words and patience will usually be the best things to offer her in the middle of her turbulent storm of emotions.
In calmer situations, Jadefox tries her best to be funny, even if her sarcastic humour and dry wit can be off-putting to those more sensitive. Despite her youth, she likes to be seen as the 'mom friend' - the organised one who knows what she's talking about, authoritative but fair - but also as the 'cool aunt' - someone who is dependable yet fun, whilst also being down-to-earth and collected when necessary. She will often be the voice of reason when chaos reigns, even if she does like to partake in some of the aforementioned discord on occasion. She believes in striking a balance, one that she does her best to maintain well.
Jadefox likes to believe she is good at things, relatively successful in both hunting and fighting, as well as showing interest in Clan politics. Unfortunately, the Bengal's work ethic is not always so stellar, and her laziness has seeped into her abilities. She cares far too much a lot of the time, but sometimes about the wrong things; one could say her priorities are not always aligned productively. Guilt eats away at her when she can't bring herself to provide for her Clan, but given enough direction and encouragement, the molly can show significant improvement in most areas, both physical and mental.
history/backstory
500-2500 words
10-50 | 5-25
EXAMPLE:
Frostkit was born a healthy and squealing bundle of fur alongside her brother Breezekit and sister Cloudkit, sired by their father Dreambreeze and carried by their mother Cloudstrike. Unfortunately, the litter's fortunes were destined to be horrific from the start, both of their parents passing very shortly after their birth. Confusion and fear whirled in the air as the kits were carried to safety by some KnollClan warriors who found them. Thankfully, they acted quickly to save the newborn kittens, intending on keeping the kittens' legacy alive. With no time to properly grieve their late parents, Frostkit was plunged into a world of emptiness, the lack of maternal love creating a shy, insecure kitten.
Frostkit became Frostpaw, but nothing about her life changed. Still, she sought out the affection of a family from her siblings, both older and from the same litter, but her heritage was crumbling around her. Death after death; disappearance after disappearance; it was all taking a toll on Frostpaw. Struggling to make friends due to her stunted social skills, the tuxedo grew up lonely and frail, trying her best at her training but still being painfully average at everything. Negativity shrouded Frostpaw's mindset, affecting her already low levels of motivation, so much so that it caused her to postpone her apprentice trial for two moons. Miraculously, the young molly still managed to pass the first time, a rare moment of joy, though it quickly dwindled as she wondered what the point of it all was if there was nobody to be proud of her.
Silent as the midnight air and stealthy as a shadow, Frostwhisper gained her warrior name, even if she wasn't completely sure she deserved it. Such thoughts pushed her to explore the territory alone for the first time, seeing if the newfound taste of freedom would help to clear her mind. All she was met with was more tragedy. Running into a MireClan warrior, a fellow feline with vitiligo, the tuxedo managed to infuriate Lichenhaunt with their discussion. A rage-fuelled fight ensued, an out-of-character burst of aggression streaming from the docile KnollClan molly, all of the stress of her thoughts crashing down as she vented through her claws. Still, Frostwhisper was too small, too weak, and quickly got put back in her place, enduring a harsh slash across the face, leaving her with a grisly wound. Everything went black. Primal fear immediately replaced her uncharacteristic anger, shooting her instincts straight from fight into flight. Her head screamed for her to run, panic and pain searing every frazzled nerve in her shot system.
Frostwhisper managed to escape the brutal claws of Lichenhaunt, but her vision did not return. Permanently blinded, the young warrior was left beaten and broken under the care of her eldest brother, Asterveil. This new adjustment completely threw the tuxedo for a loop, forcing her to step back and take a new outlook on life. Will she learn to appreciate what she has too late, or will this traumatic event only further her gloomy outlook on the world?
one-shot
500-1500 words
10-30 | 5-15
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