So Raven'paw was creted for a roleplay I created. I made custom clan, PetalClan, then another was added, StormClan. She is in StormClan, with three siblings. I made her because I wanted to. I will put a link to the rp if you wanna check it out.
So as a kit, she always felt left out, by her siblings and mother, and even her clanmates. Her mother died on her six moons, and the other kits didn't wake Raven up. She became mad and upset at them. Sorry it's a little long, so im gonna use a spoiler
https://www.lioden.com/topic.php?id=304429488465
I also need help thinking of a name for when she becomes a warrior
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Story
My name is Raven’paw. I am an apprentice in StormClan. The other Clans are PetalClan and PeakClan. My mother is called Night’song. My two sisters are Acorn’paw and Beech’paw. My brother is Berry’paw. I love them all, but I am always scared they will laugh at me. Whenever they go play or go do something, I am never invited, and I am too shy to ask them to join them. I feel like I am always left out, as nobody ever notices me, I think.
I forgot to say what I look like! You can guess by the name, Raven’paw, that I am all black. Almost! I am all black with a dark grey tail tip, as well as dark grey paws. I have icy blue eyes, which I love.
Raven’kit looked at her siblings, who were all playing with each other. She sighed, wanting to go play with them. She was too shy, though, thinking they wouldn’t let her. They didn’t look at her a single time. Always left out. You should know this by now, Raven’kit! She thought to herself. She shook her head, and sat down, staring off into space. She imagined being a warrior, patrolling and hunting by herself. She shook her head, and layed down, in a pose that made her look dead, as her siblings and their friends talked to each other.
Raven’kit was taking a nap. She woke up, her sibling sobbing around their mother, Night’song. “Wh-what happened? Night’song? Mother, wake up!” She mewed in panic, after seeing what happened.
“Raven’kit, it’s too late. She’s gone.” Beech’kit had said, nuzzling her. Wow. They couldn’t have been bothered to wake me up! But of course not, even though she was my mother too, I couldn’t say goodbye. Raven’kit thought to herself, sobbing, but also angry at her siblings.
“She can’t be! She has to take care of us and watch us grow.” She yowled, very upset. She heard Beech’kit say, “Maybe if she wasn't taken care of so many kits she wouldn't have died.” Raven’kit looked at her, sobbing.
“No, it’s not because of you. If she didn’t have me, she would’ve only had three kits to take care of and this wouldn’t have happened.” She didn’t think before speaking.
Beech’kit shook her head, staring at the leader, Narrow’star. “No Ravenkit, if Narrowstar hadn’t neglected his kits she wouldn’t have had to take care of SEVEN!” She screamed, going to nuzzle her sisters.
Raven’kit got mad, glaring at Narrow’star. A leader who can’t take care of his own kits, or check on the cat taking care of them? Pathetic. She thought. “Oh, so it’s YOUR fault that my- OUR mother died?” She hissed at him.
After a bit of the kits sobbing, he mewed gently to them. “Would y’all like to help bury her?” Narrow’star asked. One by one, the kits nodded. Narrow’star took their mother to the clearing, and hopped onto the rock, calling a meeting. “Our only queen, Night’song has passed. We honor what she has done for the clan.” Narrow’star said, giving the cats a bit to grieve. “But we do have seven kits that are the age of six moons.” He went on with the ceremony. “Raven’kit, you will now be known as Raven’paw, your mentor is now Berry’finger.” Raven’paw touched noses with Berry’finger, then watches as her three sibling and the others got their mentors.
Raven’paw and Berry’finger were in a clearing, Berry’finger teaching her about herbs so she will stay safe. She used this as an opportunity to get her mind off her mother.
A few days later, Raven’paw was bored, and left camp. She found a grassy spot, and laid there sleeping. She didn’t mean to fall asleep, but she did. When she woke up, she went to run to camp, but ran into Sorrow’paw on the way back, who was with Lightning’ice and Owl’tuft. “Raven’paw, help me. This couple is holding me hostage!” He told her.
“Hush, we aren’t holding you hostage yet. But we will if you call yourself attractive again.” Owl’tuft said. Raven’paw laughed.
“You called yourself attractive?” She asked him. He said yes, then told her about her siblings that were with someone. “Wait, so two of my siblings are with someone?” He said yes, and she felt jealous. She shrugged it off. She guessed it was Berry’paw with Maple’paw, and Aloe’paw with Acorn’paw. She sighed, then looked at the ground. She walked off, her head hanging down. “I’m happy for them.” She tried getting her mind off of it, but could only think of the others not waking her when their mother died. She got mad, digging her claws into the ground. She bared her teeth, then kept walking. She was out of sight when she climbed a tree, and went as far up as she could.
She looked at the ground, seeing Sorrow’paw at the bottom of the tree. “Go away.” She said, her jaw clenched.
“Not until you tell me why you seem jealous!” He called.
“I said go away before I claw your pelt off and use it as my nest.” She yowled.
"No, not until you tell me what's wrong." Sorrow'paw said, climbing up the tree. Just then, Berry'finger, her mentor, found her.
"I've been looking everywhere for you! Are you alright?" She asked.
Raven'paw yelled at them. "NO I'M NOT OKAY YOU SHOULD KNOW THIS." She climbed quickly down the tree, going to hide in the apprentice den.
Beech'paw got up and curled next to her. "I'm guessing you don't want to talk about it." She said. Raven'paw shook her head. "Are you alright? You can talk to me if you want." Beech'paw told her.
"No I am not alright, I don't want to be here anymore." She said quietly.
Beech'paw stood, flattening her ears to her head. "So you're just going to leave and forget about all of us?" She hissed.
Raven'paw stood up. "No I wouldn't forget about you!" She stormed out, going back to the tree, climbing it with anger. She climbed higher then she did before, and didn't stop until one of the branches broke under her weight. She screeched, falling, hitting all of the branches on her way down as she tried to grab onto some. She hit the ground with a thud, her body hiding in the grass. Her breathes were faint, and she was covered in bruises.
When she woke up, she was in the medicine den, and they were trying to treat her. "Where's Beech'paw?" She asked, worried for her sibling. They didn't know, but then she was asked if any bones hurt. "Yes, my front left leg." She answered. "It's my fault Beech'paws missing, I shouldn't have gotten mad at her." She said, her head hanging down.
"No it's not, but it is your fault you fell from the tree." She heard one of them tell her. She laid down, trying to rest, as the warriors looked for her sister. She was worried about Beech'paw, and hoped she was okay.
She slept for a bit, then when she woke up, she heard someone. "I think I know where Beech'paw could be."
"Where?" Raven'paw sat instantly, careful on her leg.
"In an old tree stump. She loved sitting in it." Maple'paw answered.