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Posted on
2023-04-25 20:58:23
[Just a side note: this is quite long and will take up a few separate posts]

This is written in a second person POV and will be a showcase of my writing ability.

You see a mass of male lions crowded in and out of an underground cavern, and curious, you go closer to look. Squeezing past fur and flesh, you find yourself facing a large paw carved into the back wall, with a small door hidden behind a pale cotton curtain. A few young lions are conversing with the males, a few females are counting piles of silver and gold beetles, and passing them through the shrouded door.

One of them catches you watching, and whispers to her friends, before standing up gracefully to approach you. Her features are striking and beautiful, reddish-pink fur complemented by mottled rosette, topped up by a silky wavy mane and warm brown eyes.

She says sweetly, “Hi, I am Kiko. Welcome to Sunset Cove!”

You reply with a growl, wary, “What is this place for?”

Her tail whisks in the air, gently brushing your back and sending uncontrollable animalistic content through your body.

Her voice sounds like a song, “Do you want lore for your pride but can’t do so yourself? Do you want to add backstories to your pride members but wants someone else to do it? Do you want to plan out your cute cub’s future without spending brain juice? Then pay beetles or items for Sunset Gaze to write them for you at Sunset Cove!”

“Well, we like eating those juicy chewy beetles!” She adds with a hint of sarcasm.

When she catches you gawking in confusion, she laughs, tilting her head back, and explains with an eye roll, “That is what they forced us to say to newcomers like you, so awkward and weird… But I guess it works. Don’t tell Styx though.”

“Styx is the common name Sunset goes with when he wants to get closer to another female lion. Sunset Gaze is too long a name for the poor gal to remember,” she clarifies, as if reading your mind.

Continuing, she says, “Anyway, I’ve got to show you the rules and the prices before we get distracted or I won’t get my pay.”

Her tail is raised as she leads you to one part of the cavern, “Well, potential customer, let’s go look at the rules first… A bit loose for my liking but I can’t say for you.”

The board reads:


RULES:

- I will take most NSFW orders, but there will be price adds and some restrictions. We can discuss your NSFW order to see if I can do it.

- I can do stories (of any length and genre), lore, naming suggestions, poems, and more! If not listed above, feel free to tell me what you want and I might be able to work out a price with you!

- Please don’t be rude to me or to others, under any circumstances.

- When I take on an order, I will specify a time frame that I need to finish the work. If you want it faster, add beetles to help energise me, or just wait. Even if I finish it within the time frame I won’t be sending it to you but will be sending a message that I have finished and a price you need to pay to get it right away! The price is very low though.

- If I did not finish the order within the time frame and there is no den message specifying why, you are allowed to send ONE reminder message. Don’t flood my inbox.

- If you are on the waiting list, wait. You can pay beetles to get your name up the list. The exact amount you need to pay varies depending on circumstances.
I did say that I can do anything, but you have to follow Lioden TOS. I don’t need to get into trouble.

- Please pay up before I start doing the order. If you can’t get that much payment, which isn’t that possible, you should at least pay half the price so that I know you won’t cheat me.

- If you want to pay in items, specify that. If it is mixed payment, specify the amount of gb/sb you are paying and the items’ total value.

- Reply in this thread. I will ask you questions after that. Do not repost after your initial order (unless it is a separate one of course!) and instead add on to your first reply, and I will do the same. If you want to add requirements after I have started the order, you would need to pay extra money, the amount depends on the number of words I need to rewrite and differs from case to case. If I have not started the order, just shoot me a pm and no questions asked!

- I need money so keep ordering!!!

So here are the rules… Not a lot, right?


Kiko turns to you, “Alright. Styx has a bit of weird humour. You are taking too much time reading this stuff.”

You look back, and to your embarrassment, you see a few males waiting impatiently behind you. Blushing, you move away to make space for them. Kiko then leads you to another set of carvings.

“And this is my favourite part! The money! I just LOVE beetles…” She smiles.




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Edited on 07/05/23 @ 20:41:07 by Styx |G2 Piebald clean (#371963)

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Posted on
2023-04-25 21:00:52
The board in front of you reads:

Pricing

Below are the different categories of orders you can place and the price for each. I do bundle deals so keep reading!

Naming Suggestions:



Lore



Poems



And stories can be discussed via PM or in the comments.

Kiko says, “it is quite long… but there is just one more place to go, just to show you around. You don’t really need to know that, but we do.”

She rolls her eyes again, “Let’s not block those big customers, shall we?”

You look back to see males standing behind you, and they don’t look happy with waiting. So, you follow Kiko to another board.


Waiting List

- Username of user - Specifics of order - Progress
- Username of user - Specifics of order - Progress

Blacklist
- Username of user - Duration of Ban - Reason of Ban
- Username of user - Duration of Ban - Reason of Ban

Special List
- Username of user - Specifics of Special Treatment - Reason of Special Treatment
- Username of user - Specifics of Special Treatment - Reason of Special Treatment

Completed Orders
- Username of user - Specifics of Order - Link to Finished Product
- Username of user - Specifics of Order - Link to Finished Product



“Okay, we’re done. Try to order at least something from us, okay? I am sick of eating fish soup,” Kiko sighs, and leaves you alone to tend to someone else, and you watch her give the same instructions to the newcomer, pondering…

Maybe you will order…



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Edited on 25/04/23 @ 23:20:00 by Styx |G2 Piebald clean (#371963)

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Posted on
2023-04-25 21:06:47
What are your prices? Cant find them



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Posted on
2023-04-25 21:08:48
Its a WIP, but ill be done soon. Just subscribe and come back later. Ill pm you when its done



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Posted on
2023-04-25 21:09:14
Alr!



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Edited on 25/04/23 @ 21:09:19 by October (They/It) (#329598)

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Posted on
2023-04-25 23:13:32
Im back to see if i could possibly get lore/a desc for a very silly little gal in my pride



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Posted on
2023-04-25 23:15:56
Okay so link the girl. And a few things:
How many words (read pricing for details) for lore
Any specific requirements?
Anything else?



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Posted on
2023-04-25 23:19:02
I can afford abt 100-200 words, No requirements expect for a possible addition of the fact she has a lot of animal decor that could be used in the desc and here’s her link

https://www.lioden.com/lion.php?id=794186912997

Lost my clicky link template sadly



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Edited on 25/04/23 @ 23:19:22 by October (They/It) (#329598)

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Posted on
2023-04-25 23:22:01
Okay send over the money then!
(220sb, 20sb added for the extra requirement)

Should be done in ten minutes.. so not gonna add to waiting list



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Edited on 25/04/23 @ 23:25:08 by Styx |G2 Piebald clean (#371963)

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Posted on
2023-04-26 06:58:21
May I offer 2 yolks for 1000 words per lion lore?



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Posted on
2023-04-26 07:24:00
Could I get 4 Poems!
(2 must be rhyming)

I think 640sb?



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Posted on
2023-04-26 17:40:31
@Vienna Is it okay if you offer in roasted lambs instead? I prefer roasted lambs. And yes. I will get to it as soon as, well, we agree on the roasted lambs.

One roasted lamb should be enough.

And also, if I am doing lion lore, can you link the lion and give any other requirements you need me to add? I will work on it when you send the payment. Should be done around 1-2 days after that.

@Kitsune Specify in this format:

Poem 1: Does it rhyme? Number of lines? Topic and any requirements?
And so on
I will put you in the waiting list soon, when we get this sorted out.



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