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Chinook (#212440) Sweetheart View Forum Posts Posted on 2024-02-18 21:53:57 |
Examples for my writing commissions! Please do not comment here. Click here to go back For more examples, feel free to read my pride's lore here! Pride Description/Formation/History Examples Comm for #171201 When cubs are born on the night of an eclipsed moon, celebrations are put into place to commemorate the remarkable occasion. Even when their births are planned to be on such an event, it seldom truly occurs. That rare night, a litter was born - one of strictly females. The lioness that bore the cubs and the sire were simply lowly travelers, that of which belonged to no pride. The daughters inherited their father’s mutation, they were mighty primals. Unbeknownst to the traveling couple at the time, that small, blind, mewling pile of fur would bring about a great new era to their lands. But for now, they had to hide and protect their vulnerable offspring. Shamans would seek out their eclipsed cubs, killing them, seeing them as nothing but bad omens and curses. For their early cubhood, Soleil and the rest of her sisters were confined securely to the hip of their mother. Their upbringing could be described as a rather graceful and peaceful one. They blossomed into the years of their early adulthood like beautiful flowers of the field. Their days of play fighting and vulnerability were over. The sisters banded up and left their parents, through teary good-byes and reluctant last looks. Such an event was obligatory - it’s something all must go through to even step on the path of maturity. Soleil’s band grew into respectable lionesses. Many local coalitions had their endeavors at vying for their paws, all of which were in vain. Soleil was never particularly interested, much less than her sisters, at least. Oftentimes, as Soleil grew, she found herself distancing herself from her siblings. It was strange, she’d never thought she’d do that, but something about it felt right. Maybe she was made to be on her own, especially on the day the sisters were finally convinced to pair up with a coalition.. An odd one. Something was off about these lions.. There was something.. wrong. Whenever Soleil raised her snout to catch a whiff of them, all she could smell was the scent of distrust, disloyalty, as if there were dark intentions laying deeply beyond their gaze. For this, she chose to stay away from them as they paired up. The fateful morning arrived, the morning the stench of blood met the cool morning air. The blood of the sisters, that was. Their newly paired coalition wasn't a coalition at all. They were simply deceitful shamans, gone under the guise of protective males, on a deadset mission to kill the eclipsed lionesses. For the most part, they were successful. The band of sisters had been dispatched as a result of their attacks, apart from Soleil. The act of her separation seemed like divine intervention. If she took part in that pairing.. She too would’ve been killed. She would’ve joined her sisters in the ground. Soleil had barely any time to grieve; she needed to get far away from the shamans. She fled from her homeland, and unknowingly into rival pride territory. Unbeknownst to her, a shaman had caught up to her in her slumber, and relentlessly attacked without second thought. The attacker easily had the advantage, or so he believed. Soleil reciprocated with twice his strength, feasibly overcoming and defeating the shaman, but she wasn’t let off unscathed. She suffered deep gashes across her body, eventually fainting from the blood loss. Soleil woke up, laid across soft bedding - her wounds patched up with medicinal herbs. The elders of this strange pride had taken her in and cared for her… but why? She sourced the king of the pride, a large, elderly primal. His face was dappled with old battle scars. She could tell his eyes had seen many days. Soleil questioned him, asking him why his pride had saved her. It was through their conversation that she discovered this king was a fellow eclipsed cub, and that he could simply distinguish such lions, making his pride a haven from murderous shamans. Soleil didn’t know why, but she felt safe with this king, as if he was a parent or an older littermate. Their features did have their similarities, after all. After the king passed away, his court came to Soleil, explaining that he in fact was her elder brother and that he didn’t want her to know until after his passing. It was then that Soleil found out that her traveling parents sired the rulers of all the prides encompassing their land, all of which were eclipsed cubs. Since Soleil was a part of such royalty, they granted her the grace of leading her elder brother’s pride. She declined, explaining how she wanted to start her own. She then took a handful of lions from her brother’s pride, and with them, her pride expanded and grew exponentially, becoming a more prosperous one than ever seen before in the lands. She welcomed any eclipsed lions into her pride, especially any with the possibility of being her littermate. Her pride became set into place next to her sibling’s surrounding prides in the lands. Among every lion that joined her pride, two had stucken out - Ember and Jupiter, lions that were born the day of a solar eclipse rather than a lunar eclipse. They had joined the pride in seeking refuge from a local famine. The two had gotten close to the queen, and they became a strong trio, regardless of Ember and Jupiter’s lack of royal heritage. It wasn’t long before the pride would welcome their first ever hybrid - Iris. She was truly a lioness to be treasured. She was a rarity, and a beauty. Her presence in the pride alone simply encouraged mutation diversity. As more mutations were welcomed in Soleil’s pride, they eventually made appearances among the other prides, too. Soleil continued to look after her pride, doing everything in her power to maintain the wellbeing of her beloved pridemates. The lands that these prides belong to have always been prosperous ones, and will remain that way, as long as there’s rulers like Soleil. Comm for #319769 Somewhere amidst the plains, the plateaus stand tall. Though it seems nothing more than just steppe, their presence is undeniable. In legend, the plateaus watch over everything they see. Their morning songs, portrayed in gusts of wind or the lights of the dawn never fail to accompany the presence of life within them. A land of endless grasslands can exist only because of them. It’s a sign of great power and importance to be on this plateau. This is what the lions hold close to their hearts. Not many know when it truly began, the presence of the pride in these highlands. Others will turn to the ever famous tale of an unnamed prince. His life was just short of ordinary. Born to a jungle pride and subjected to the grueling task of becoming heir and uplifting the duties his father bore on his back. There was not a lion in the pride whose paws weren’t worn out. Even when he was a little cub, so much was expected from him. Why did the pride live like this? He wasn’t sure. Their extreme lifestyle may have been adapted through their extreme environment. A savannah would have been preferred, though one can only grumble. When his father tasted the sweet relief of death, he took the crown. He yearned to alleviate his family from the burdening jungle lifestyle, and he did just that with the first ever migration the pride had seen. Along the journey, many were lost to the grip of death, either through the exhaustion that primarily affected the elderly, or starvation. Maybe it was better that way. He couldn’t promise a better life, but he could surely try to look for one. The pride thinned by the day. The remaining lions grumbled and groaned, blaming him for their losses. “Why leave our old home?” “At least we were surviving,” they would pester him. Regardless of his ears ringing from complaints and his tired paws, he pursued on. By the time he reached the ever-known breathing plateaus, only a handful of faithful lions remained. With them by his side, they clawed away at soft deposits of soil in the sides of the plateaus, forming lengthy yet sturdy overlapping tunnels. From then on, the lions haven’t given a thought about leaving their new paradisiac home. The tunnels provided solace from the great thunders and heatwaves. The cubs born into the pride after this time regarded their home as nothing short of perfect. With that, they expanded rapidly, their numbers larger than ever before. The prince had many sons and daughters born to him. The tunnels were filled with his offspring, and his heart was filled with love for them. Some say he loved his cubs just as much as the sun and the moon love the stars. When death beckoned him as his bones grew weak and his body bore the gripes of life, he succumbed to the afterlife. A great honor was given to him thereafter. His body may now only be a part of the grass, but his spirit was said to be a part of the plateaus, living with his pride forever. Comm for #137128 It starts with the tale of the two queens, Valory and Lola - both alike in dignity and royalty, but separate in duty. Queen Valory conducted the hunts, and Lola nursed the cubs to safety. King Reffy’s favor was certainly not divided unfairly among them, he held both of his queens near to his heart. To express his benevolence, he instituted two households, each one taking on the name and duty of each wife. King Reffy intended for these two households to live within the pride for the generations to come - Household Valory, and Household Lola. The former shaped up to be a very powerful and influential household, mostly where hunts are planned and executed. The latter was less of an influence, as it was the center of broodmothers in the pride, though its importance still stood regardless. A descendant of the Lola household, Lola Urri, soon found herself in a predicament with the evil second king, Phoenix. Help from Household Valory would be preferable in a case like hers, in which she was planning an uprising. Though she soon found out that her small, yet sturdy, band of broodmothers was sufficient in dethroning the iron paw. Lola Urri was greatly praised for her victory, and was regarded highly by her pridemates. With the position of king now vacant, the pride turned to her to decide who was going to don the role under her watchful eye. Ravana, a young male, was particularly ambitious when it came to leadership. Lola Urri knew she would have to be careful about her next choice, but luckily, seldom anyone had anything negative to say about Ravana. He sent his daughter, Shallow, to talk to Lola Urri concerning his possibilities of kingship. The pride, with Lola Urri’s approval, came to a consensus and Ravana was crowned, where he would lead under Lola Urri's guidance. Worries of the future prompted Shallow and Lola Urri to seek out a way to ensure the safeguarding of future generations. Lola Urri especially did not want the possibility of another tyrant taking control of the pride, so the two sought out higher powers. On their journey they were enlightened by the many shamans and elders of other prides of the goddess who resides in the Frozen Pond, a dimension in which the souls of the lions can prevail forever whilst also being able to interact with their previous worldly home. Lola Urri and Shallow, with the help of this goddess, were promised entry to this dimension upon death, from where they would be able to guide and control their beloved pride forever. With the guidance of those in the Frozen Pond Council, the pride would enter an era of peace and prosperity that would span years. The beloved King Erwan and Smitta would lead the pride during these years, contributing greatly to the peace and quiet. As Smitta marked old, many of the lionesses were anxious about the future heir, a smilus, fearing his potentially ferocious nature greatly. Generations would pass. The queen Valory Ritter, who had lived her whole life without a speck of hatred towards anyone, was growing old. Her granddaughter, Valory Lor, noticed her grandmother's increasing elderhood. It sparked anxiety in the young lioness as she came to the realization that she would bear the same fate of inability to help her pride in her older years. Because of this, Valory Lor longed to join the immortal Frozen Pond Council to avert her future yet inevitable death, but such an action would likely not be free of repercussions. In most cases souls would gain entry to the Frozen Pond upon death if granted by the goddess, but a living lion entering the dimension was unheard of. Valory Lor feared it would tear the fabric between the two realms, destroying the pride in the process. Even if she were to cross over successfully, Valory Lor was without cubs, meaning the Valory Household line would end there, cutting off the legendary huntresses that had been a part of the pride for generations. She was unsure what to do. Comm for #241735 The Sultan Pride. Feasibly the most feared forces of claws and teeth in the entirety of their reserve. These savages will stop at nothing to feel the sensation of blood-painted muzzles and dripping claws. What sets the fierce Sultans apart from the other barbarous prides? Their notorious thirst for the blood and flesh of man. They are the bane of poachers, inspired by the spirits of their ancestors to hunt down and kill any man who dares to carry his weapon into their lands. He will surely be ripped apart, and his skull will be hung for all to see. A warning sign. It’s tragic what happened to the ancestors of the Sultans. Their abundant food sources were poached to a pulp. The coalition of males leading the pride at that time died out gradually as a result of starvation. The lands were so barren of food, that their huntresses could not succeed in making a kill. The pride was ultimately unable to make decisions without their leaders. Many disputes and bloody fights ensued, some of which led to mothers killing their own young in desperation for the absence of competition. Those who had otherwise fled had no other choice, but to resort to eating their own in order to survive. It’s the fault of the poachers, that the cubs they bore didn’t receive a chance to grow, to learn, to find their own mates, or to start their own pride. It wasn’t fair. Their cubs were the epitome of innocence, they shouldn’t have had to suffer. If the lion’s stomachs were satisfied, if their pridemates had not been killed for their pelts, they never would’ve thought about needing to kill or eat one another to survive. The poachers were to blame. But man kept on killing, and killing, and killing. He spared no one; he destroyed everything in his path. Those of whom survived the poachers eventually gave birth to the savages that would fill the land thereafter. They would bring the vengeance against man that their ancestors could not. They were the beginnings of the true Sultan pride. The torture the ancestors went through was unfortunate, inhumane. Perhaps it was necessary, though, in order to start the savage beginnings of the maneaters. Without them, man would be hampering around unscathed. That couldn’t happen, now, could it? They needed consequence for their actions, their actions against the Great Mother, the ancestors, their actions against the innocent lifeforms victim to their greed. The Sultan pride would make sure of it, that no man who dares to disrupt their lives will live. His bones will be chew toys for their cubs, his flesh will satisfy the hunger of the pride. Now, the poachers do not dare step into the territory they once ruled, and it will stay that way, as long as the man-eating lions are around. You have liked this post!
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Chinook (#212440) Sweetheart View Forum Posts Posted on 2024-02-18 22:08:06 |
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Lion Biography Examples Comm for #258527 Kvasir. His mother knew something was wrong. She glanced at the little newborn pile of fur at her paws, her snout wrinkling up in disgust. He was not like his littermates. He was bigger, his claws and teeth jutted out just a little further, coarse fur already covering the nape of his neck. He was a mutated cub. A primal. Mutated offspring was the mark of a non-healthy litter, and was a bad omen in itself. Kvasir’s mother took the squeaking cub in her mouth, carrying him outside the warmth of the den. The cool air hit his wet pelt like it was attacking him. Biting him. He shivered and squirmed, flailing his small limbs around. He wanted to go back, but that was not going to happen. The next thing Kvasir knew, he was in the trunk hollow of a large tree. He opened his young eyes, vision milky and blurry. A sleek gray figure swung by in the above branches and murmured something about irresponsible lion parents. He mewed and looked around, noticing the immense crowds that were here. They bundled around the base of the tree, large males and females dropping off newborns and adolescents alike. Some were taking the abandoned lions back to their own prides. Others snatched up bodywear and jewelry laying around before anyone else could. A human-like hand suddenly snatched up Kvasir and carried him to the back of the hollowed out trunk. Kvasir tried to resist, but there wasn’t much he could do. The odd creature set him down, then lifted up his lip to check out his teeth. “A primal cub, you don’t get much of those.” It said, swiftly scaling up the tree to swing on the branches once more. Monkey. Kvasir would spend his cubhood and adolescence at that tree, growing up, watching everyone except him get taken into new prides and homes. He would’ve been convinced he’d stay there until the day he died, until old Hœnir showed up. Hœnir wasn’t like the rest. He saw something in Kvasir that others didn’t. He held his powerful gaze on the adolescent as if he was studying him. Not a word was said, but something about Hœnir just felt solemn; reserved, like he had great stories to tell but kept them to himself. After a few minutes of deciding, Hœnir took Kvasir back to his pride. Kvasir didn’t quite get it. He’d never experienced pride life before, it was a first. On top of that, he always felt like the odd one out. There were few mutants in Hœnir’s pride aside from him. He looked and acted so different from regular lions, what if they were judging him? “Kvasir, come.” Hœnir’s stern voice called out. It nearly spooked Kvasir since he rarely heard him speak aside from the occasional beration. Hœnir sat atop a small hill shaded by an acacia. Kvasir padded up and sat beside him. The sun was setting. “Your training begins tomorrow. You will be the next king of this pride.” Hœnir said before simply getting up and walking away. Kvasir was left sitting there, stunned. That was it? Nothing else? He just mundanely dumped a huge responsibility on a young lion, not even staying long enough for any objections! Kvasir’s large jaw hung open, he couldn’t believe it. He had only stayed in this pride for a few days, and the king already decided that he’s going to be the heir. He was nervous, but excited. Even if he got the opportunity to decline, he wouldn’t. Not many get the chance to lead a pride. For the next several years leading into adulthood, Kvasir would train under Hœnir’s careful watch. He excelled in his lessons, gaining a kingly mindset in the process. However, Hœnir was a lion of very few words. Kvasir would quickly gain annoyance at Hœnir's lack of verbal guidance. He scarcely gave feedback even when asked for it. His great jaws simply remained shut. Kvasir oftentimes found himself left to his own devices. It’s not that Hœnir didn’t care. He loved Kvasir like he was a cub of his own. But perhaps his preference of self-containment left Kvasir to decipher things on his own. The time came, when Hœnir became a grandpaw, old and weak. His paws were worn out, his muzzle hairs turned gray. He called for Kvasir. “This is your pride now,” the old lion said. Kvasir locked eyes with Hœnir, and there was a sense of mutual understanding. For once, Kvasir was glad that Hœnir didn’t say a single word more. Comm for #171201 Ember was born the day of a solar eclipse. The lands were dark and shadowed. Ember’s parents immediately feared she was a curse in the form of a cub, a curse that was coming to repay them for the bad deeds they had committed. Their fear was unmatched. Do they dare abandon their offspring, though? Perhaps it will just add onto their bad deeds? Will the consequences pile up? They were at a stalemate. They had little idea what to do with Ember, but they kept her regardless. However, they would fear her for every second they lived. All they could think of when they saw her, was that she was nothing but a bad omen sent to collect their lives as a pension for their past mistakes. Ember grew up oblivious as to why her parents were terrified of her. Was her appearance haggard? Terrifying? She could never quite figure it out. She greatly lacked the nurturing she required as she grew up. Ember couldn’t help but feel borderline abandoned. She didn’t feel loved, she felt like an outcast. It’s safe to say she was basically on her own when she was weaned. Her parents brought in kills from time to time, only letting her eat the scraps when they were finished. She might as well have been out in the wild fending for herself, it would make no difference. So, one night in her adolescence, she left. She ran away from her parents, and didn’t look back. Along the way, Ember found another young lion around her age, a male. She expected nothing from him except for him to shy away from her in horror. But, he didn’t. He enjoyed her company, and would often go out of his way to talk to her. This gave Ember a sense of hope in herself, that maybe her parents were just paranoid, and there was really nothing to be afraid of. Ember decided to look for a pride with her newfound confidence, stumbling across the accepting leadership of Soleil. She was welcomed in immediately, and made friends with the queen right off the bat. She found another lion, Jupiter, that was born the day of a solar eclipse. The two instantly clicked, and became close friends. (Another) Comm for #171201 Jupiter is among a number of lions that were born the morning of a solar eclipse. He was unlucky, his pride had strict shamans that sickly enjoyed killing off eclipsed cubs. His mother had prayed every night that her cub wouldn’t be born on that fateful morning, but to no avail. When Jupiter entered the world, the first thing his mother did was take him and run off. She raised Jupiter alone, moving locations every so often so that predators wouldn’t catch up to her vulnerable cub. It pained her to have to raise him like that, without the protection of a pride, but she had to do it to ensure that Jupiter wouldn’t be killed by some greedy shamans. When Jupiter grew up, he aided his mother in hunting, making the burden of catching something to eat a bit easier. His upbringing was tough, but it made a strong lion in the process. Jupiter became rather formidable, easily discouraging any possibilities of a fight with just his glance. The day came, where Jupiter didn’t need his mother anymore. By now, she was an elderly lioness, slowing down. She wouldn’t be capable of surviving all that well on her own. Jupiter was concerned, and didn’t want to leave his mother despite not being a cub anymore. The least he could do was help take care of her. His mother told her to bring her to her old pride, and so he did. Upon arrival, the pride didn’t recognize her. They told him that they wouldn’t bring her in, despite it truly being the old pride that she fled from. Instead, the shamans sensed that Jupiter was an eclipsed cub, and immediately charged them. Jupiter managed to fight off the shamans easily, killing them, but his mother was less fortunate. The elder lioness suffered deep wounds and was losing blood quickly. She knew she was going to die, despite Jupiter’s panicked attempts to save her. She was at peace. Her last words to Jupiter were an apology - stating that she didn’t know that this is what would’ve happened if she returned. Jupiter accepted, and his mother passed away. Stricken with grief, Jupiter set out on his own. He couldn’t bear to be by himself, but he didn’t have the energy to look for companionship. He curled up near the base of a tree, and gave up. He was awakened by patrollers belonging to Soleil’s pride. Once they understood he was an eclipsed cub, they brought him in. He was immediately showered with approval and was welcomed. It felt like a warm embrace that he so desperately needed. The pride was friendly, every single lion in that pride was difficult to not get along with, especially Ember, a fellow eclipsed cub. He was glad that he found the missing piece to his life, in the form of a pride. Comm for #90617 It’s commonplace that, when a cub is born, things must change. The mother must adapt her nurturing instincts, the father must learn how to protect; the cub must learn how to survive. Without those seemingly placed-in decrees, no life would be surefooted. But perhaps one cub would contradict that. Divine Intervention. A fitting name for the lioness, her pelt reflecting the divinity of the heavens in a way that can only be depicted with one’s eye. Needless to say, she was an inordinate beauty. An enchantress. A white swan among black swans. A child of the Astral Plane. Her pride, on the other hand, had but pelts droughted of charm. Her own father decided her unfortunate fate upon first look - out of pure suspicion one of his lionesses had been elsewhere with other males, as no such beauty existed within the pride. Divine Intervention had been abandoned. The poor cub didn’t even have the fluids cleared from her throat before she was left for dead. She was innocent. Meak. Young. She did no wrong, this couldn’t be what she deserved, not a cub like that. The Astral Heavens saw her struggles, her small body grappling for survival. They could not stand by and watch as one of their kin died before they could even live. That was certainly a wrong waiting to be righted. The Astrals beckoned the small cub, calling her by name. They donned her as their own; clothing her in their Astral garments, marking her to let all know of her divine descent. She bore their glow - their pride. She carried out their earthly duties, serving and providing sacrifices without question. She was certainly an Astral ambassador, who would not go a single day without hearing the sounds of worship. As she grew into adulthood, she was welcomed as a respected rank into a large pride. She was borderline royalty, appraised as among the most important of lions due to her Astral backgrounds. This pride, it took care of her well. Unbeknownst to the regal Divine Intervention, jealousy was heaving to pure hatred and spite in one of the pride shamans. She was incomparable to Divine Intervention, her appearance greatly lacked. The great Astral lioness was cursed by the envious shaman, despite her Astral protection. As part of the curse, her uterus withered to infertility. Her maternity was destroyed, she could no longer bear cubs. Divine Intervention realized her infertility as her failed conceptions became greater in number. The lioness was devastated. For nearly her entire life, the triumph of cubs was a joy she always desired the experience of; but, alas, she would never receive it. She was laden with unwavering mourns. Any attempts at comfort were in vain. Had the shaman gotten what she wanted? Was this enough? Did any lioness truly deserve the depredation of infertility? Divine Intervention fled her pride to grieve alone. Her Astral succors heard her; they always did. They could not bear to see her like this any longer - so they once more gave her their aid. For the years that she had served them, serving as their symbol of power, they paid back to her, in the form of a blessing. Divine Intervention was immeasurably blessed with two uteruses, both beyond healthy and viable for conceiving cubs. Her fertility blossomed as she bore litter after litter of strong offspring. Her kin filled her life with a joy she had otherwise never felt before. The pitter-patter of little paws brought fulfillment to her ears, something constant worship otherwise couldn’t bring her. She loved her offspring just as much as the Astrals loved the moon and the stars. You have liked this post!
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Chinook (#212440) Sweetheart View Forum Posts Posted on 2024-02-19 09:21:19 |
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Pride Encounter/Territory Description Examples Comm for #344111 Water. It echoes through your mind, driving you crazy. You don’t know for how long, but you’ve been trekking an infinite expanse of cream-colored sand mounds, the monotonous light shade making your eyes sore. Your paws are fatigued, your bones feel like they’re hollow, your body is laden from the scorching sun beating down on your back. You can’t remember the last time you had even the slightest sip of water. The dryness in your mouth makes it painful to inhale the hot air. Your vision is blurry, but you notice a soaring dune, sticking out from the short sand hills. Around the bottom of it, there’s… shade! Shade, and what seems like beautifully green vegetation, offering a striking counter to the constant hue of the sandy landscape. There are many waterholes nearby, providing even more foliage. You begin making haste towards one of them, but, as you get closer, your vision clears, and you can see four temples resting in the shade at the foot of the dune. You gawk in awe at them as you approach, each one standing tall, beautiful engravings etched into the cut sandstone. Many small tufts of green jut up from cracks in the stone as you realize the vegetation you saw earlier blankets the base of each temple. You aren’t sure how you didn’t see them at first, either they blended in well with the dune in the back, or you were hallucinating. Probably the latter. A loud snarl thunders through your ears, jolting your body and making you leap straight up in the air like a kitten. You bolt around, vigorously searching for the source of your scare, when you’re met face-to-face with a lioness. She’s large, almost as big as you, pretty, too. Her eyes are milky and white with no visible pupil. Her pelt is a blend of varying dark-blue hues, with white undersides and rosettes dappled across her fur. Gold body paint runs along her back and tail, ornamentally draped across her sides. Her face is adorned with the decorative golden patterns as well, giving a nice contrast to the colors of her coat. She wrinkles her muzzle, baring her large fangs at you. She curls her claws into the sand as she flicks her tail. You take a few steps back. “Who are you?” She asks. “A traveler,” you answer, “I mean no harm.” She suddenly stands up from her defensive stance, her expression changing from aggressive to confused. “A traveler? Were you not escorted in?” She asks, looking around dumbfoundedly. “No, I came here by myself.” “Well, as long as you’re not here to hurt my pride.” She says, letting out a sigh. “I apologize for my entrance. Usually our patrols bring in any lone travelers with them, I assumed you were an intruder. What is your name, young king?” You tell her, then she tells you hers. “I am Nefertari. It’s good to meet you. Come, follow me.” She leads you to a temple that’s smaller and more displaced from the other four grand ones. “Each one of our main temples sanctions lions based on rank. This one here is used for the unsorted, the travelers stopping by in need of rest before heading off to continue their journey. This is also where you’ll be staying. The hunters will communally bring in food from time to time, and you may drink from one of the many waterholes around.” Nefertari explains. You suddenly remember your need for water, and you can feel your mouth becoming dry again. “So, I was supposed to come in with a patrol?” You mention. She looks back at you. “Yes. We have ornamentally carved wooden posts that stick up high into the air on the outskirts of the territory. Travelers stop and wait by them, then on-route patrollers come and take them into the territory. You must’ve skipped by them.” “How was I supposed to know?” You ask. “It says so on the posts. I understand if you missed them, they are quite far out.” She says. You reach the entrance of the small temple. You peek through, noticing how much larger it looks on the inside. You’re surprised at the amount of lions there are, cubs, adults, adolescents, all having a seemingly great time. Some are sprawled out on the ground or raised sections of floor. Chirping cubs race by your feet, giggling and laughing. “Oh, and one more thing,” Nefertari says, “make sure to get all the sand off your paws before entering. Enjoy your stay.” Comm for #421745 The soft rustling of savannah grass shielded behind a thicket of underbrush both catches you by surprise and implores your curiosity. You weren’t expecting any encounters while on your short trek, but you decide it’s best to assess the source of the noise. As you near, your ears prick up and as you catch faint chatter and the sound of swishing water. You poke your head through the underbrush and spot three lions - one male and two lionesses - chatting and reclining around a small pond. The females lie around the male, one with her head in his paws and the other one nuzzling and grooming his great snout. Both of them are stunning, one with a noctis pelt with patterns that turn into dark, mottled blots as they near her lighter, grayish underbelly. Gold paint runs down her back and drapes her side, a stark contrast to her dark fur. The other lionessess’s pelt reflects the night sky, and it’s not simple darkness with a few dappled stars, but one of the night skies you have only seen in your dreams - so clear that it was as if you were looking at the constellations themselves. The male is not bad, either. His coat is a plethora of colors with tufts of long hair at the top of his head. You emerge from the thicket and approach the bunch, hoping they are friendly. The lionesses look at you with soft smiles while they caringly tend to their king. The large male turns to you and gives you a confident smile with marks of mischief in his eyes. You aren’t sure what to make of them just yet. “Hello, traveler.” He begins. “What brings you into my territory?” You aren’t sure if he’s trying to be condescending, or simply just curious. It wasn’t like you knowingly wandered in, either. “Forgive me, I didn’t know…” You respond, “I’ll turn back.” The darker lioness calmly prompts you to stay, “don’t worry about it, we get many travelers passing through here. There’s no harm in you staying here.” She says, maintaining her soft, mellow smile. The other lioness gives you the same feelings of serenity, contrasting that of the king, who gives off a strong sense of confidence and charisma. He is quick to agree with his partner, which makes you feel like he wasn’t trying to be condescending after all, “Yes…” he starts saying as he gets up, his two girls following closely behind, “feel free to look around and rest up before you continue your journey…” he looks back at you with a serious expression, as though he actually wants to make sure you’re well taken-care of before you set off. This was before the mischief sparked back into his eyes, “but please, keep to your own wives.” You watch as the three lions disappear into the brush. Comm for #179872 You walk along a rather familiar path, though you never notice the change in your surroundings. You’re not in your territory anymore. You’re somewhere else… somewhere paradisiac. You glass around, taking in everything there is to be taken in; the sweet smell in the air, the soft colors of the flora, the soft breeze in your mane, tousling your fur. There’s a thin trail of pawprints leading from the base of a hill to the top. You can’t see the top from where you’re standing, so you decide to trek up the hill. As you get closer, you hear talking, and laughter. Among them you distinguish a rich, deep voice. It’s soothing to your ears, like a medicine you’ve been missing out on. You pad up the rest of the way to the top, where you’re met with a group of lions laying on flat rocks, their bellies up towards the sky as they sunbathe. They all chat like old pals. You’re not sure if you should leave or not. You don’t want to intrude on anything, or ruin a good time. They haven’t noticed you yet, so you turn to leave just as a voice says, “Well, hello there, friend.” It’s that same deep voice you heard. You pause, looking back. The lions are all sitting up now, staring at you. Their eyes aren’t filled with annoyance, rather, contentment. You notice a large, ethereal ferus laying on the stone in the middle, lionesses all around him on the surrounding rocks. A real ladies man, you think. His pelt is a beautiful mesh of soft pinks and whites, flowers reflecting those colors draped across his body. “Where are you going so soon?” He said. “Why don’t you join us?” His voice was so calming and convincing, you didn’t need to think twice. You lay on an unoccupied stone, joining in on the sunbathing party, chatting like you’ve known these lions ever since you were a cub. The lionesses are mostly flirting with the ferus, while you butt in a few funny stories from your pride. As you get up to leave, you give the kind king your gratitude. “You are welcome here any time, friend. Please, call me Sappho. Oh, and feel free to bring some of your lionesses with you next time.” You have liked this post!
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Story with Dialogue Examples From my story, the Winter Cub Ifarhi’s dark eyes could barely pierce the dense, snowy smog, cursing to himself. The snowstorm was the worst that happened to the pride, well, at least the worst thing that happened recently. Large flakes of snow softly and rapidly fell from above, caking the outer layer of Ifarhi’s thick fur. His breath steamed the air and turned the falling snowflakes in front of him to vapor. His paws tensed under him. He was growing impatient. His consort was not back yet. He didn’t know who to blame, the snowstorm, or her. Still, he felt like cursing the gods for it. Out of all days, the storm happened today. Maybe it was his consort who was cursed. Standing, looking out into the seemingly infinite fog, a dark figure broke through and made it into Ifhari’s vision. Finally. His queen trotted to approach, wearing a nervous smile. She nuzzled the underside of his large chin, but his displeased disposition remained. “I’ve done it,” she urged to tell him. “Have you?” “Yes,” she replied. She slinked the rest of her body under his chin, before hastily padding away. She looked back at Ifhari, flicking her tail. “I am sorry for making you wait, my lord. If that bothered you, forgive me, or I may be cursed.” Ifhari’s head turned to look back at her, his brows furrowing even more. Each word she spoke increased with nervousness, “my lord, we should head back now, our pride may be concerned, they’ve been waiting for us.” “No,” Ifhari said, “I've been waiting, and all you’ve done is deceive me.” The queen pinned her ears back as she realized Ifhari was looking at the ground, at the small cub paw tracks that lead behind her. “You did not do what I asked, you are trying to keep the cub alive.” Ifhari said. “You’ve deceived me!” Before the queen could speak, Ifhari lunged at her. Working on getting more! :) You have liked this post!
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