some of the day 1 lethal health messages read a little bit oddly. they insert the name of your cub into the message, even though there isn't any way to rename your cubs to something besides the default "Cub" before you receive the message. but these messages are structured as if you've named the cub already, like they don't expect it to still use the default name.

others don't have this issue and are properly structured to account for the cub still using the default name, and I think it'd make sense to bring these day 1 messages in line with the others.

my proposed changes:

lipomatosis
original:
"Your lioness gave birth to Cub, and notices it is different to all the others. It has lumps all over its tiny body, but appears healthy otherwise."

edited:
"Your lioness notices the Cub she gave birth to is different to all the others. It has lumps all over its tiny body, but appears healthy otherwise."

harlequin ichthyosis
original:
"Looks like Cub was born with a skin thick like a shell. It has trouble breathing and suckling."

edited:
"Looks like this Cub was born with a skin thick like a shell. It has trouble breathing and suckling."

sirenomelia
original:
"Your lioness gave birth to Cub, a slightly deformed baby. She's unsure if it will survive but it seems to crawl for milk like all others."

edited:
"Your lioness gave birth to a slightly deformed Cub. She's unsure if it will survive but it seems to crawl for milk like all others."

cleft palate
original:
"Oh no! This cub has been born with a facial defect - a cleft lip! Its snout is split heavily, and Cub has trouble with breathing."

edited:
"Oh no! This Cub has been born with a facial defect - a cleft lip! Its snout is split heavily, and it has trouble with breathing."

additionally, it seems like the day 1 text for extra limbs doesn't include a link to the cub, which might make it a little more inconvenient to find which cub was born with the mutation. a link can be inserted on the bolded word here:
"Your lioness notices her Cub is different to all the others. She can't even count all the little legs! She's very worried but the cub curls up and suckles milk nicely."