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2024-10-28 15:51:19


hey guys so i really need to know if this lore is good or not but its for my main acc and kinda hints to my side which will be similar but not quite if this is good if not ill change it lol




so uh let me know?





LORE

In the heart of the Queens den, an ancient legend whispers through the winds, revealing the origins of the hierarchy that reigns over our pride lands. The scrolls tell tales of an era when our ancestors were consumed by conflict, as fierce rivalries splintered families and divided the pride.

At the center of it all were the Livetians, the former royal family who had long held dominion over the pride lands. For years, they ruled with grace but gradually became distant, turning a blind eye to the struggles of the other clans. Resentment simmered beneath the surface as families grew weary of being stepped on, their voices overshadowed by the weight of Livetian authority.

Finally, unable to bear the burden any longer, the discontent sparked a rebellion. After an entire decade of conflict, clans fractured, and alliances formed. In a surprising twist of fate, two powerful clans—the Rothschilds and the Cathets—made the bold choice to unite. Drawing strength from their shared vision, they surged forward with unyielding determination, pushing against all odds until they brought the once-mighty den of Livetian to its knees.

From the ashes of this war, the Rothschilds and Cathets forged the esteemed High Court, establishing a new order that fostered unity among the clans. Meanwhile, the den of Meridon, known for their unparalleled stalking skills, chose the path of huntresses, leaving the turmoil behind to embrace the thrill of the chase. The steadfast den of Shavinthin, revered for their protective prowess, became the guardians of this newfound peace, standing vigilant against any threats that dared disrupt the harmony.

Yet, the Livetians found themselves stripped of their former glory. Cast down and shunned, they became servants and outcasts, living in the shadows of those they once ruled. Their plight grew dire, some even being bartered or traded among other prides, a pitiful reminder of the thin line between power and despair.

As this legend unfolds, it continues to shape our pride, reminding us of the strength found in unity, the consequences of neglect, and the lives that intertwine within our realms. The echoes of our ancestors linger still, urging us to honor their legacy as we navigate the vast expanse of our territory, guiding each paw step with the wisdom of the ages.

In the present day, Saethin, an outsider once adopted by the last queen Adora, now reigns as the current pride queen. But harmony hangs by a thread, as tensions rise between her and her adopted sister, who governs the neighboring pride. Their once-bonded sisterhood is now strained, caught in a web of rivalry and ambition. Both leaders strive to assert their dominance on the landscape of their territories, unsure if the ties of blood and love can withstand the pressures of pride politics. As the echoes of ancient legends continue to shape their paths, the fate of their prides hangs in the balance, a living reminder of the conflicts that have long defined their lineage.



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Hoovbeetz (#471105)

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Posted on
2024-11-04 11:51:03
Yup! That lore is great! You can actually have a lot of fun with lore......you can either leave it like this or......you can do what I'm doing!https://www.lioden.com/topic.php?id=304429558626 It's a lot of fun interacting with people and getting ideas! Of course, you can always put sort of like a summary, which would basically be like what you have, and then have a link at the bottom that leads to something like what I have, that way, if their interested, they can click on the link and read the full story. If they're not, they don't have to scroll through the whole thing! Hope this helps and just let me know if you need help.....It's tricky getting people into your lore!



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2024-11-18 08:52:58
ooo wait that actually really cool... im sort of doing some in bios but that would be a rlly good idea to expand on..



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