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2024-11-17 20:37:10
I used to play a game with my family when we went camping where we’d sit in a circle and one person would start a story. Once that person was finished, the next would continue the story how she saw fit, and so on till whoever wanted to end the story would do so

I thought I could do something similar here! Before I start off, let me lay some ground rules!

1. No double posting
2. Try to not make your entry overly long (maybe a paragraph or two)
3. Nothing vulgar, cursing is fine but anything sexual or NSFW is absolutely off limits (plus it’s in the ToS)
4. Do not start another story without confirmation that the last one is actually finished. When you are the finisher of the story, make sure you clarify.
5. Likewise when you’re the starter of a new story, clarify you’re starting. You may also simply add the title and allow another person to start based on that title
6. KEEP THE SAME POV FOR CONSISTENCY
7. Have funnn this is a very awesome way to be creative and see where the process takes you!!

Possible title situations
- add title and add story beginning in one post
- add title and allow another person to begin the story
- finish the story and allow the finisher to add the title simply based on how the story goes


I’ll start!
“The Void”

It all felt…empty. No sound, no sights, no senses at all, and yet I felt a feeling of discomfort and panic that I couldn’t begin to place. I had only just fallen asleep, hadn’t I?… (continue from here!)



Finished products: https://www.lioden.com/topic.php?id=304429560798



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Edited on 17/11/24 @ 20:57:18 by EmilyWhoSmiles (#238777)

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2024-11-17 20:39:24
Suddenly, a glimmer of red, bloody eyes appear from who-knows-what direction, quickly disappearing.



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Edited on 17/11/24 @ 20:41:14 by PoppyPetal5522 (#497694)

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2024-11-17 20:40:07
Ignore por favor ;)



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Edited on 17/11/24 @ 20:44:41 by EmilyWhoSmiles (#238777)

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2024-11-17 20:45:15
(double posted, please ignore, added in next post because it made more sense)



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Edited on 17/11/24 @ 20:53:26 by PoppyPetal5522 (#497694)

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2024-11-17 20:46:27
I shrieked but there was no sound. I was surrounded by nothing. No trees or ground. My camp, now a distant memory, had all my things in it. What was I supposed to do? I looked around frantically, trying to get some sense of location. But in all directions, everywhere I looked was emptiness. Except for those damned glowing eyes.



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EmilyWhoSmiles (#238777)

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2024-11-17 20:46:47
(heyo poppy please remember not to double post. Even though I posted with an interjection, it isn’t something counting towards the story so yours still counts as a double post. Don’t delete it or anything but remember for the future)



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2024-11-17 20:49:58
Shoot! Something from behind dragged me down into something that feels like it is trying to suffocate me... like inescapable fur... the red eyes appear again... I CAN'T BREATHE!!!

Oh wait... the suffocating feeling is releasing... AHH!!! MY EYES!!! From the brilliant light, the red eyes come into view... Huh? The scary red eyes' possessor is quite... small.



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Edited on 17/11/24 @ 20:52:41 by PoppyPetal5522 (#497694)

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2024-11-17 20:55:54
Some tiny critter was staring intently back at me in the strange void I was in. He was similar to the size of a cat, but he didn’t quite look like any animal in this world.



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Indelible_Vestige (#1534)

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2024-11-17 20:58:27
Huh..I guess he looks harmless enough but still, maybe it's better to be on the safe side? Who knows what this creature is capable of.



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Edited on 17/11/24 @ 20:59:27 by Indelible_Vestige (#1534)

EmilyWhoSmiles (#238777)

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2024-11-17 20:59:34
(when I upload that to the final story page I’ve made, may I make it a thought?)



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2024-11-17 21:00:53
I look at the strange creature more closely, having... what looked like wings, a tail, and looked kind of like a snake with legs?

"Oh, right. You're from the lion world. I'm sorry to say this, but you're dead. I'm a dragonet, and my name is Opal, if you're wondering. Come with me to the dragon world, where you will transform and have a new life," the dragonet explains.

I start to float/follow the dragonet or whatever, into a swirling portal that appeared behind you... I guess that happens a lot here.



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Edited on 17/11/24 @ 21:12:15 by PoppyPetal5522 (#497694)

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2024-11-17 21:07:58
In a moment, the dark and cold void was transformed into a warm and dry paradise. Hundreds of other lions lazed around. Opal looked at me and grinned. “You’ll have to wait a little while till you’re transformed, but once it’s your time, you’ll know. Till then, relax, make friends, do whatever you please!”



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Edited on 17/11/24 @ 21:08:40 by EmilyWhoSmiles (#238777)

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2024-11-17 21:13:23
(I'm so used to writing stories with talking to the reader style)



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2024-11-17 21:16:46
Forgetting about Opal, I look around, noticing a two-headed lion cub walking up to me. How sad that a cub... or is it two? must die so young...

"Hi!" one head of the cub says energetically, jolting you out of your train of thought.



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Edited on 17/11/24 @ 21:20:05 by PoppyPetal5522 (#497694)

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2024-11-17 21:17:57
(omg that is so adorable and sad at the same time I cannot wait to see where this goes. I’m going to sleep but I’m excited bout this)



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2024-11-17 21:19:33
(ok bye!)



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