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Also Lia-LIn I'll have to input that into Nightmare's next post

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I had the strangest dream, the first Night I got to yellowstone, I wrote a little prologue. I want to see what you guys think of it.

There is no once Apoun a time for this story, nor is their a The End at its final chapter. It is just a tale that may or may not be true, its events twisted over time, like any good story-teller tweaks his wares. But some say it is true that a gravestone lies, in a small meadow not to far from the first town after the battle of the wall, and one may say that the tombstone states, “ We fight For all our brothers who have fought and died beside us, before and evermore. Like them we fight for the future. Our future. The enemy is stronger, but we fight for the right to be free. And although the grass lays red under us we will fight to thee very end. And we will win. Why? Because we have to. For the future. And here lies the memorial for our comrades who fell in the Battle of the Wall and will be forever remembered in our tales, for the brave sacrifice they payed.” Now I am telling you that there is such a place, but if you believe me. That is your choice.

“Its good to fight with one beside you who you trust, in battle one needs a brother steadfast and strong like a life-raft on the sea.
Been all around the world, and not once found anyone like you. Wouldn't trade you for nothing, my brethren who mean more than kin”

"Their here! There here!" Excited whispers passed through the thin walls, the eerie singing and stead-fast marching of troops could be heard from the town, awakening its population. But they were on edge anyway, they were always on edge. Shouts came from various structures, that one maybe could consider a shack, although maybe it was more of the trash pile that scared, desperate people lived in. Dim light began appearing behind the tent walls. These battered humans were lighting candles, the thought could make one chuckle that these people, who lived so far in the future still used wax. But no one was chuckling. In no time at all the streets filled with half awake people, stumbling in the early morning light to catch a glimpse of the weary line of troops. Yes, there they were, dim, but growing closer. People shouted, pointing they cried out in hope to the leader, although some of the younger children, who did not know how dire the situation was, made small remarks on how handsome he was.
“Do you see him?”
“There?”
“Yes there!”
“Ooh”
“Now I see what you were talking about..”
But the swoon kids were quickly silenced by their parents, as the crowds asked three desperate words, " Is it up?" The leader, according to the younin'gs a handsome man, no wait more like a boy looked up, his green eyes pierced through the dawn hours. Strange, they were sparkling, as if he had been crying but he carried such great news! How could one be upset? He nodded, and with this simple gesture, the crowd erupted into cheers, seeming not to notice the haunted look on all their saviors faces, and also how the returning army was smaller than the one they had wished good luck, in the morning.
“Did ye hear correctly?”
"No more living like rats"
“It can't be true!?”
"Safety at last"
“Are you sure?”
" My children will grow up without fear!"
"Thank.."
A sudden cry came from the soldiers, a not bad looking but ragged looking man, no wait another man-boy seemed to break free from the others restraining him. He staggered over to the leader, and fell over as if in grave pain, although he looked relatively unharmed. "Please Everrett,” at this a collective gasp arose from the crowd, as if this broken boy had said something wrong, in-fact he had. For in the eyes of the gathered, the leader was a commander! Not some mere human! But maybe the broken boy had known him before he was the people's hero. "Please, we can go back! Their still alive". A sudden thought seemed to spark a wild look in the boys eye's, “Gravley might still be there!” The effort it took for this speech the solider fell on the ground, still muttering please. But his defeated look was all one needed to make the assumption whoever he was talking about was already dead. "You know their not Myer."

A tentative voice rose from the gathered crowd, " Um, Commander. Where is Commander Gadle?" With this question a concerned muttering begin, as the folk noticed that many other soldiers where missing. "We had to run away!” A savage voice called from the second line of troops, a girl, seventeen at the most. As she steeped forward she cast a disgusted look at Myers and Everrett. One could not of guessed they were the best of friends, before the war. “You know why we lost so many? Because of you! Because of you!" The crowd backed away as she pointed at them, “The wall had to cover the whole area,” she raved, “110 acres! Like we are ever going to use that land! And what did you do while we fought? Cowered like little rats, the weak deserve to die! What are you? Just a bunch of weak idiots, we risk our lives trying to save.” She was totally out of control her red hair fought its way out of her coat, waving in the early morning air, looking like blood. Her black eyes gleamed with hate. “And! Gravley and Madeline and a whole bunch of teenagers pretending to be soldiers, have died! And for wha---” The girl took a breath, ready to begin another rant. But a snarl rose from the leading commander, very animal like, who the broken boy had referred to as Everrett. “Thats enough Liaz."

“What!” Came the startled reply. “It will never be enough never! I will kill all of them right here right here!” Then, to everyone surprise the ferocious girl began to cry. She sobbed like a child in a bad dream, “ You know what kept me going? Why I did not die like the rest of these fools? Because I had to protect us..” She was sobbing and angry at the same time. “That was the whole reason, you and Myers in School,” the words were coming fast and quick now, almost unintelligible with her blubbering. “ IkeeptyousafeandthenGravley,daughterournationalalliesteacherwhoweallhated.” She was completely off her head now, “And now for what? Gravley and Madeline are dead, and those years where I kept you all safe were for nothing because of them!” Everrett looked sadly at his old friend, “Someone get Solider Liaz a tissue, and we will resume talking like normal people.”

Once that was done, he shook out his head “We had to retreat from the battle, leave the wounded and dead." a clouded look came into his eyes, "Even Grav-- Commander Gadle," A cry came from the gathered, many voices cried out, but one louder than others "but the wall! If you had to retreat its unfinished!" a horrified look came into the eyes of the humans, a hunted look. People started wailing and rushing back into their movable shacks, like that could save them. "Silence!" a firm commanding voice came out of the young leader, but in that one word one could see why, he was their leader.
"The wall is finished, we stayed until it was done that's why we lost so many." He looked around at the gathered faces, then at the shacks. "Permanent housing construction begins today." With that he stumbled into a slightly bigger, but still shack-like house, waving for Myers, and Liaz to follow him.

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Its a bit short, and in its 2nd draft, but I kindof like it.

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Look an new oc! (Its my last one, I hope) He is my tenth!

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Right now I don't have a name for him. Any Idea's? I want something fierce. I'm calling him Unknown right now. XD

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Wow! That's so cool!

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The only thing I can come up with is Neon XD

Also, I changed both this account and my side's avatar. It was a bit difficult finding something 150x150 that I like, but I found something that I like X3 Hope you guys like

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Wow its nice! Where did you find it?

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I just looked on Google images XD I searched 'Animal pictures 150x150' for my main, and 'Fossils 150x150' for this account

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Oh Nice.

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Oh wow Savannah, I just noticed your story! That is amazing! I read it while listening to the song Inside Out. It just made it so much deeper. Like honestly, that is so good!

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Thanks Lia-Lin.

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Oh no! I have again succumbed to the buying bug! I now have a new oc. Her name is Midnight.

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:O Le Pretty XD Great now I am in the mood to make new OCs...brb XD

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How many do you have? Midnight the human is my eleventh.

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