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Vanii [Main] (#36229)

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2015-02-06 13:56:15
This pretty much is the evolution of my OC as she is still a working process. Anddd how much I have improved? I think xD haha

October 30, 2014 (Before)
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January 31, 2015 (After :D) ((>___>Ignore her Super Bright Leg))
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I Still Have a LONGGG way to go. I need to know how to Anatomyyyy. I also need to get my hands on a tablet ;-; !!! But I am A Broke College student. Urghhh.



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Edited on 06/02/15 by FurryBae (#36229)

IllusionLion (#28866)

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2015-02-06 13:58:03
I can help with anatomy if you need it.

If you're wanting critique, I can also offer some of that. Let me know.



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Vanii [Main] (#36229)

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2015-02-06 14:00:11
Ahhh Any Anatomy Tips would be very helpful :0 And Critique ? :o I don't really mind haha :3!



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IllusionLion (#28866)

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2015-02-06 14:06:07
I find anatomy redlining is most helpful. May I?



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Vanii [Main] (#36229)

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2015-02-06 14:07:54
Sure go ahead :3



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IllusionLion (#28866)

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2015-02-06 14:23:27
My apologies, I just redlined and realized I was doing horse anatomy, not deer. >.>

So, I'll leave out the redlining and offer some critique instead. :3

The sloped low shoulder (part connecting to the front leg) should be higher up.
Make sure that you draw the joints (not exactly sure if they have a name) that are seen in hoofed animals, instead of just making the legs straight.
The eye should be smaller and moved up.
The fur needs fixing: I see this fur 'style' a lot in new artists. I cannot really properly explain how to do it, but you could try asking another artist how to fix your 'beginner's fur' as I call it.
The mouth area: what animal's anatomy are you going for there? I see a canine nose, but deer body, so I'm not sure.



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Vanii [RLC🍃] (#36697)

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2015-02-06 14:30:26
Lol xD Well at least you tried !! And Yea i am so terrible D: I usually have been drawing wolves/dogs all my life. Its REALLY hard trying to shake that off my hands when I am drawing. Most of the time they come out looking like dog muzzles.
- I totally see where the front leg needs some fixing
- And omg yesss ;-; I need to draw the knee joints and shizz
- I have tried drawing fur >_> of lord its hard.

Your critique is very useful ! Thank you. Mostly since you're more experienced than I am :o!
Critique helps because You can't see what others see when you draw. Her body looked kinda normal to me in my eyes but now that leg thing is bothering me xD.



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