Posted by -LOCKED - [July] Remorse from Apedemak

Sherni {Glass Eyed
Onyx King} (#118227)

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Posted on
2020-02-21 06:39:01
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I now this is a little early, but I figured I might as well put it up now. In the endings where Apedemak comes to his senses, he is quick to apologise to Menhit- which is understandable- and even your King, if he ended up almost getting him killed. But he makes no mention of Tefnut- his own queen whom he brutally murdered for no real reason. He may no longer have cared for her, but Tefnut was still by his side for who knows how long, and is the mother of his daughter- whom he does care for. I feel that he should at least acknowledge that in his dialogue, perhaps something along the lines of regretting killing her. What do you guys think?



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Posted on
2020-02-21 06:40:51
YES!!!



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Sherni {Glass Eyed
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Posted on
2020-06-28 02:28:50
Since July is coming up I figured I'd bump this. How do you guys think Apedemak's apology to Tefnut should go? This is my version:-

Menhit is looking intently at a spot just over your shoulder. Apedemak follows her gaze and starts at something invisible to your eyes. He bows his head, a sorrowful expression on his face. "I'm sorry," he says softly, "I never meant for- I just wanted to- no... there's no excuse for what I did. Can you ever forgive me?"
You don't get to see what the answer is, but Apedemak lowers his head again, his expression unreadable as he accepts it.



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