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i don’t mind doing a mix of sb and gb either, i can take her off tc for now if you think you’ll be able to get it!

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idk, you think somone would buy her before i can offer?

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honestly not sure, i don’t have it set for offers atm, but i can switch that xb

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we can see, i still dont know if im going to be able to get 40gb.
also are people dead r sum? nobody has said anything

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that’s all good, i can go ahead and switch to have offers open, if your able to, great, if you’re not by the time i need it that’s all good to, i’ll probs be able to buy the gb if need be

and i guess-

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so many double sends omg-

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lol

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I need a opinion on my writing, it’s not finished and sounds like a 5 year old wrote it.
So far is it good?

Said writing:

Warrior Cats & Lore


Sap’Pelt
A fully blind She-cat elder who is clam but often times clueless. She forgets very easily and is bold, she has a snarky attitude sometimes.
Sap was blinded by a major fight when she was a young warrior. This mentioned fight was when she came across two foxes protecting their kits, the two foxes thought she was trying to harm the kits. This caused her to become blind and have many scars. Sap was found almost dead, its a miracle that she survived. This fight affected Sap a lot has it caused her to change many ways she Lived, it forced her to give up her dream to be deputy or leader one day. It prevents her from patrolling and hunting Sap had gotten very fond of this way of life. She has had no kits due to her partner leaving her because she was blind.

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i think there are a few areas that can be shorted or worded a bit differently with the same meaning, but other wise it sounds great! (please keep in mind i’m not much of a writer myself-)

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what do you think of my heirs plan? https://www.lioden.com/wardrobe.php?c=4KgThQ0n5i

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I can’t do links, it’s not clickable for me. But whatever it is I can grantee that it is fine :)

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Alr ty anyways!!

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It doesn’t matter what other people think, it’s what you think. It’s your acc not theirs

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