Hey so ive just started to re-write an old story of mine and im looking for feedback and just people in general to read it. it is in its rough as guts stage but i would still like to get feedback. i am also in need of a proper name as the one used currently just a place holder. i also want to try a create a better blurb As the one i have now isn't to good along with the possibility for a better cover. if you want to help me any of these i would be up for some cooperation with someone else. It is only new so it wont have much yet but i plan to update it as much as possible

The story is about some friends who get taken to another world where they find they have 'ability's' and go to school of sorts to lean about them. and its kind of a best friends to enemies kind of thing because why not.

I will leave a link and honestly any sort of support you could give me would be great.

Oh and dont worry about being to harsh, i probably need to hear it, just as long as it can help me and not just shitting on my work. Thanks :)

https://www.wattpad.com/story/333817532-born-wild-re-write