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Nyladam (#250572)

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Posted on
2023-03-31 15:26:04
Shorts stories, pride lore, or life stories, or more!

Prices
Short Stories- 500sb
Lions- 350sb
Pride lore- 1-2gb depending on how long you want it
Life stories- 500sb-3gb depending on how long you want it
Advertisements- 50sb per ad (Every five comes with one free)
Lion stories- 400sb
Poems- 300sb

The normal word counts are the original price, but after that they are 1gb per 200 words. It will round up to the next hundred (unless its below 135 words). Tell me the word range that you wish it to be at.
1000sb=1gb
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Lion Lore examples


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Lion story examples!


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Pride lore is my favorite to write! I also DO NOT do the main thing as romance, crushes and stuff like that is fine, I just prefer to not write something that's all kissy kissy as an AroAce person.

Comment or PM me so we can start discussing your lore! The more details you give, the better your lore!



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Edited on 04/11/23 @ 12:21:42 by πŸŽƒ Nyladam πŸŽƒ (#250572)

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smilus (#224716)

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2023-04-17 09:10:36
Can you write me a sonnet for my ELA class about Grilled Cheese?



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Nyladam (#250572)

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2023-04-17 09:12:46
Yep! I'd say that would be a short story, or do you think it'd be something else? I've never had a comm for a sonnet before!



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smilus (#224716)

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2023-04-17 09:15:22
Lol!! I would say short story. here is what the ELA teacher sent.. so this is the rubric

13/4 : 3 requirements :

Rhyme scheme
iambic pentameter
Content and structure

Shakesparean sonnet:
a,b,a,b,c,d,c,d,e,f,e,f,g,g

It is bad form to rhyme a word with itself

Iambic Pentameter is five iambs in a single line.


Content is typically to praise someone or something . 4 lines in a sonnet equal a quatrain. Praise the subject for 2 quatrains or 8 lines. The 3rd quatrain is called the turn.


also how do i pay and when do you think it can be done



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Edited on 17/04/23 @ 09:15:51 by Mali (#224716)

Nyladam (#250572)

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2023-04-17 09:20:24
Thanks for the information! To pay you'd send me the sb as a gift and I send you the sonnet in a message, maybe in a few days, my brain cells have to come up with something and they have to reasearch some words to use, I'll try my best to have it done soon though.

Question: Are you having me do your homework for you? It's not a problem if you are, lol.



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smilus (#224716)

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Posted on
2023-04-17 09:30:11
yes lol I suck at writing



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Nyladam (#250572)

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2023-04-17 11:24:52
You should try writing one too, so you can get experience, and you choose who's is better, and then use that one! The only reason I write for comms, is because I suck at art and I write books for a living...

I'm going to be done sooner than I thought, but I might make more in case the one I'm working on doesn't follow the right rules. It won't be extra charge though.



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Edited on 17/04/23 @ 11:25:58 by Louie (#250572)

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smilus (#224716)

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2023-04-17 11:27:11
ok! Yea I already wrote one, but it doesn't sound to good



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Nyladam (#250572)

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2023-04-17 11:30:04
I'm sure its great! Let's hear it, unless you don't want to, that's a 120% okay.



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smilus (#224716)

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Posted on
2023-04-17 11:30:55
nooo... plss



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Nyladam (#250572)

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2023-04-17 11:32:41
Thats fine, I need a word that rhymes with it, And not fit, unless you want a ripped grilled cheese, I'm wondering what you can come up with.



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smilus (#224716)

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2023-04-17 11:33:42
hit, lit, bit, grit thats all I have



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Edited on 17/04/23 @ 11:34:50 by Mali (#224716)

Sparrow πŸ’—πŸ’œπŸ’™ (#267091)

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2023-04-17 11:39:25
Hey lions was just wondering how the lore for my server was coming? I responded here about a week and a half ago and I just wanted to check in :)



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Nyladam (#250572)

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2023-04-17 12:16:35
Mali, ooh, thanks!

Sparrow, its going along great! I just have to finish up the last few sentences and it'll be complete! I'm working on both at the same time so I don't get bored of one of them.



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smilus (#224716)

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2023-04-17 12:17:47
Louie

can I go ahead and pay you so that I don't accidentally spend the 500sb.. I may forget



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Nyladam (#250572)

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2023-04-17 13:46:03
If you want too! I have a few more lines to do and I'll send the first one over to you and start work on the second! (only after I finish my other comms)



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