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Jessica(HOL15-23july ) (#30659) Terrifying View Forum Posts Posted on 2014-12-27 07:02:32 |
HELLO THERE I have been experimenting with my graphics tablet and I am wanting critique. 1 2 3 Form Number: Whats good?: What could be improved?: What should be removed?: Overall thoughts?: How much would you pay?: 0 players like this post! Like? |
Jessica(HOL15-23july ) (#30659) Terrifying View Forum Posts Posted on 2014-12-27 07:17:49 |
Trade I will secretly PM someone and then they can offer whatever they want on the trade. In order to enter just answer and pick a slot 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20. 27594 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40. 42576 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 0 players like this post! Like? Edited on 27/12/14 by THE DEAR (#30659) |
Domino [9.1k Vernal|x9 Fel] (#27594) Sapphic View Forum Posts Posted on 2014-12-27 07:25:09 |
Number: Is that my user number? xD (#27594) Whats good?: I really love that first dog drawing! Im in love with dogs so.. *-* What could be improved?: You can imrove your wolf drawing, you can make its muzzle better or you can make its eyes more realistic, it'll be cool! What should be removed?: Nothing to remove i think c: Overall thoughts?: Nope, i like your drawing! How much would you pay?: Erm, for the first dog, 200ish maybe c: For wolf 300-400ish c: (I forgot to pick a slot x.x 20 please! It's my lucky number :3 ) 0 players like this post! Like? Edited on 27/12/14 by Domino{TT/MP} (#27594) |
Jessica(HOL15-23july ) (#30659) Terrifying View Forum Posts Posted on 2014-12-27 07:26:12 |
Saintly [Mosaic Pie] (#42576)
Good Natured View Forum Posts Posted on 2014-12-27 07:28:37 |
Number: 20 Whats good?: Digging the coloring and linework. I know a few people aren't keen on "sketchy" looking lines, but I personally love 'em.~ What could be improved?: Detailing. It all seems a bit... Flat, you could say? More details/shading would benifit this piece greatly. What should be removed?: The blood. I'm sorry, but the splatter effect just looks... Unnatural, to say the least. You should also blend the blood shading more. It just looks weird. Overall thoughts?: Good so far, needs a bit of improvement to be truely great. How much would you pay?: 300-500 SB 0 players like this post! Like? Edited on 27/12/14 by Saintly (#42576) |
Jessica(HOL15-23july ) (#30659) Terrifying View Forum Posts Posted on 2014-12-27 07:31:06 |
Saintly [Mosaic Pie] (#42576)
Good Natured View Forum Posts Posted on 2014-12-27 07:35:27 |
Seiden π (#31516)
Grumpy View Forum Posts Posted on 2014-12-27 07:39:35 |
Number: 17 Whats good?: the first one is could What could be improved?: Honestly? Everything. Anatomy, orientation, style, quality, neatness... What should be removed?: well, I don't know? Overall thoughts?: don't want to be rude but kinda looks like a 5 years old drawings. How much would you pay?: 30sb 0 players like this post! Like? |
Jessica(HOL15-23july ) (#30659) Terrifying View Forum Posts Posted on 2014-12-27 07:41:07 |
KitCat (#30064)
Lone Wanderer View Forum Posts Posted on 2014-12-27 07:44:49 |
Number:12 What was good: I loved the dog and the last wolf very nice blood detail. What should be improved: Maybe add some shading? AnAna but more detail on the dog Overall thoughts: It was great! Keep going How much I'd pay: 300-500SB 0 players like this post! Like? |
Jessica(HOL15-23july ) (#30659) Terrifying View Forum Posts Posted on 2014-12-27 07:45:47 |
Cheeky (#7812)
Evil View Forum Posts Posted on 2014-12-27 07:53:39 |
Number: 49 Whats good?: The background and eyes are nice. What could be improved?: You could benefit from studying the anatomy of what you are drawing. Using references is always helpful! Your coloring/shading could also be improved, try and blend more, use more colors and smaller brushes to add details. What should be removed?: There is a little bit of coloring outside of your lines that could be removed. Overall thoughts?: It is pretty good! How much would you pay?: 100-200SB 0 players like this post! Like? |
Seiden π (#31516)
Grumpy View Forum Posts Posted on 2014-12-27 07:56:22 |
You ask for critique, I give critique. If you only want positive opinions, you should state it in your post. That would be useless and hypocrite, but you can still do it if you can't handle honest opinion. Spending ages on your art doesn't make it good. 0 players like this post! Like? |
Jessica(HOL15-23july ) (#30659) Terrifying View Forum Posts Posted on 2014-12-27 08:01:44 |
rime | [g2 cracked x3 ros] (#27613) View Forum Posts Posted on 2014-12-27 08:17:42 |
Number: 3 (#27613) Whats good?: I really love your design and for the 3rd picture, the shading looks good! What could be improved?: The headshot muzzles to be honest, and the blood splatters since they don't look that realistic >3< No offense! What should be removed?: Nothin' to remove. Overall thoughts?: This is hella awesome, but of course, there is always room for improvement! How much would you pay?: 500 - 800 SB 0 players like this post! Like? |
FuzzyOkapi (#36308)
True King View Forum Posts Posted on 2014-12-27 08:30:22 |
Number: 33 Whats good?: The pose above looks lovely, the angle of the paw is unique and very well posed and the front paw is lovely. <3 What could be improved?: Hmmm.. I'd recommend angling the nose a little bit more(for the headshot pics) as for the blood, it covers too much of the lovely colour underneath and instead looks like ketchup(which isn't a bad thing if you're referencing old movies) What should be removed?: There are a lot of extra lines which don't need to be present. The neater something looks the more visually appealing it will be. :) Overall thoughts?: Completely in love with the first pic and the feetsies. <3 How much would you pay?: Hmm.. That depends, I'd think along the line of sb prices for the headshots. 0 players like this post! Like? |
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