Posted by Needing critique

Jessica(HOL15-23july
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Posted on
2014-12-27 07:02:32
HELLO THERE

I have been experimenting with my graphics tablet and I am wanting critique.

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Overall thoughts?:
How much would you pay?:



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Jessica(HOL15-23july
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Posted on
2014-12-27 07:17:49
Trade

I will secretly PM someone and then they can offer whatever they want on the trade. In order to enter just answer and pick a slot

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Edited on 27/12/14 by THE DEAR (#30659)

Domino [9.1k
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Posted on
2014-12-27 07:25:09
Number: Is that my user number? xD (#27594)
Whats good?: I really love that first dog drawing! Im in love with dogs so.. *-*
What could be improved?: You can imrove your wolf drawing, you can make its muzzle better or you can make its eyes more realistic, it'll be cool!
What should be removed?: Nothing to remove i think c:
Overall thoughts?: Nope, i like your drawing!
How much would you pay?: Erm, for the first dog, 200ish maybe c: For wolf 300-400ish c:

(I forgot to pick a slot x.x 20 please! It's my lucky number :3 )



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Edited on 27/12/14 by Domino{TT/MP} (#27594)

Jessica(HOL15-23july
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Posted on
2014-12-27 07:26:12
Slot number?



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Saintly [Mosaic Pie] (#42576)

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Posted on
2014-12-27 07:28:37
Number: 20
Whats good?: Digging the coloring and linework. I know a few people aren't keen on "sketchy" looking lines, but I personally love 'em.~
What could be improved?: Detailing. It all seems a bit... Flat, you could say? More details/shading would benifit this piece greatly.
What should be removed?: The blood. I'm sorry, but the splatter effect just looks... Unnatural, to say the least. You should also blend the blood shading more. It just looks weird.
Overall thoughts?: Good so far, needs a bit of improvement to be truely great.
How much would you pay?: 300-500 SB



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Edited on 27/12/14 by Saintly (#42576)

Jessica(HOL15-23july
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Posted on
2014-12-27 07:31:06
Saint number has been taken.



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Saintly [Mosaic Pie] (#42576)

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Posted on
2014-12-27 07:35:27
Ah, gotcha. 40?



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Seiden πŸ‘‘ (#31516)

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Posted on
2014-12-27 07:39:35
Number: 17
Whats good?: the first one is could
What could be improved?: Honestly? Everything. Anatomy, orientation, style, quality, neatness...
What should be removed?: well, I don't know?
Overall thoughts?: don't want to be rude but kinda looks like a 5 years old drawings.
How much would you pay?: 30sb



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Jessica(HOL15-23july
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Posted on
2014-12-27 07:41:07
Saying that doesnt make it not rude. I took ages on these.



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KitCat (#30064)

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Posted on
2014-12-27 07:44:49
Number:12
What was good: I loved the dog and the last wolf very nice blood detail.
What should be improved: Maybe add some shading? AnAna but more detail on the dog
Overall thoughts: It was great! Keep going
How much I'd pay: 300-500SB



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Jessica(HOL15-23july
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Posted on
2014-12-27 07:45:47
btw all can be commissioned in my art shop for free.



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Cheeky (#7812)

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Posted on
2014-12-27 07:53:39
Number: 49
Whats good?: The background and eyes are nice.
What could be improved?: You could benefit from studying the anatomy of what you are drawing. Using references is always helpful! Your coloring/shading could also be improved, try and blend more, use more colors and smaller brushes to add details.
What should be removed?: There is a little bit of coloring outside of your lines that could be removed.
Overall thoughts?: It is pretty good!
How much would you pay?: 100-200SB



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Seiden πŸ‘‘ (#31516)

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Posted on
2014-12-27 07:56:22
You ask for critique, I give critique. If you only want positive opinions, you should state it in your post. That would be useless and hypocrite, but you can still do it if you can't handle honest opinion. Spending ages on your art doesn't make it good.



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Jessica(HOL15-23july
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Posted on
2014-12-27 08:01:44
I respect your opinion.



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rime | [g2 cracked
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Posted on
2014-12-27 08:17:42
Number: 3 (#27613)

Whats good?: I really love your design and for the 3rd picture, the shading looks good!

What could be improved?: The headshot muzzles to be honest, and the blood splatters since they don't look that realistic >3< No offense!

What should be removed?: Nothin' to remove.

Overall thoughts?: This is hella awesome, but of course, there is always room for improvement!

How much would you pay?: 500 - 800 SB



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FuzzyOkapi (#36308)

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Posted on
2014-12-27 08:30:22
Number: 33
Whats good?: The pose above looks lovely, the angle of the paw is unique and very well posed and the front paw is lovely. <3

What could be improved?: Hmmm.. I'd recommend angling the nose a little bit more(for the headshot pics) as for the blood, it covers too much of the lovely colour underneath and instead looks like ketchup(which isn't a bad thing if you're referencing old movies)

What should be removed?: There are a lot of extra lines which don't need to be present. The neater something looks the more visually appealing it will be. :)

Overall thoughts?: Completely in love with the first pic and the feetsies. <3
How much would you pay?: Hmm.. That depends, I'd think along the line of sb prices for the headshots.



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