Posted by Needing critique

Jessica(HOL15-23july
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Terrifying
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Posted on
2014-12-27 07:02:32
HELLO THERE

I have been experimenting with my graphics tablet and I am wanting critique.

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Whats good?:
What could be improved?:
What should be removed?:
Overall thoughts?:
How much would you pay?:



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Fireflower (Closed) (#51748)

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Posted on
2014-12-27 08:31:05
Number: 51748
Whats good?: Your ability to use gradient colors is very good.
What could be improved?: More value in the shading would make it look more real, and perhaps a study of canine anatomy would allow you to draw them more realistically and from different angles.
What should be removed?: Try drawing them from multiple angles. Try avoiding drawing them constantly from the side.
Overall thoughts?: Needs a lot of improving, but you show promise! :)
How much would you pay?: In reference to the one on the bottom, perhaps about $1.



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Fireflower (Closed) (#51748)

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Posted on
2014-12-27 08:32:57
Sorry, I meant to claim number 32. I got confused.



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. j a n n i s . (#34236)

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Posted on
2014-12-27 08:37:19
Number: 49
Whats good?: I respect your art , but sure honey I can do better. So there needs to be alot of improvement.
What could be improved?: Drawing. And shading. Make the lines clean. Edit : I do realistic art , but everyone can have their own style but my advice is to look up to canine anatomy again.
What should be removed?: The untidy lines.
Overall thoughts?: Said , I respect it ..But don't adore it although.
How much would you pay?: 100 sb. Or in dA points 20. And in money 1 dollar.



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Edited on 27/12/14 by Senpai (#34236)

Katie (#48720)

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Posted on
2014-12-27 08:48:12
Number: (I really don't know what i'm suppose to write here)

Whats good?: 1. The face and chest. 2. Color and shading. 3. Scar works.

What could be improved?: 1. The paws when there in the weird positions could use a tiny bit of work. 2. A little more fur on the bottom of muzzle. 3. Nose and maybe some more shading on that one.

What should be removed?: 1. Nothing 2. Nothing 3. Nothing

Overall thoughts?: Just a little more neat on the drawings.

How much would you pay?: 1. 100sb 2. 200sb 3. 200sb



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Miss-Riah (#49414)

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Posted on
2014-12-27 11:52:27
Number: 6?
Whats good?:
No.1 is nice! It's a nice pose and the paws look great!
I real love the nose on no.2!
The blood has nice color to it on No.3. The fact that you gave it a dark shade to go against the lighter color makes it more interesting to look at. In fact, if you also put another lighter color against it where the light would be hitting the blood then it would make it even more awesome!
What could be improved?:
No.1: The line work is a little rough and could maybe be smoothed out. Also the back legs need to be longer.
No.2: Again, the line work is a little messy and subtracts from the overall piece. You could also make the pooch's ears bigger to fit the head better.
No.3: Make ears biggers, move eye closer to the front of the face, also since it's from a side view, cut back from the black in front of the eye. If that makes sense. XD. Also you may want to try and make the blood look a little more blobby when it's not on the dog (so the blood flying off of the snout)

What should be removed?: Rough lines, and maybe the blood splattering off of snout on No.3, unless it's an angle or movement causing it to fling in that direction. If it's not, then perhaps just change the direction of the blood splatter by making it fall in less droplets and make it fall downward.
Overall thoughts?: These really aren't half bad! Drawing digitally is hard, which is why I usually stick to traditional myself. Still give yourself some credit-- these are better than what I was doing when I first started out.
How much would you pay?: Assuming we're talking SB: if you spruce up No.1 a bit then I would say anywhere between 100-200sb. No.2: 100sb. No.3: 100sb.



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Carbonation (#40083)

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Posted on
2014-12-27 15:04:21
Number:7

Whats good?:The eye realism

What could be improved?: I think the headshot's necks are a bit long, and the ears look a tiny bit too small. The blood should be smeared more. And the forst one's back legs look too short to walk.

What should be removed?: Not sure, just clean it up a bit, there are colors out of the lines and stuff.

Overall thoughts?: Pretty decent, just keep trying

How much would you pay?: 75-150sb ^^



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wooooooooo (#1362)

Sexy
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Posted on
2014-12-27 15:46:38
Number: No thanks
Whats good?: The first one has good anatomy, but it looks horribly traced (please don't do that ever). I can identify the last two as wolves.
What could be improved?: Anatomy and line quality. Look at a dog/wolf. Do they really look like that? The secret to drawing well is to draw what you see, not what you think you see. Then, what you draw becomes instilled in your mind and you won't need to look at a picture to draw it.
What should be removed?: Red eyes and eye scars are cliche. "Furry" lines are bad for readability.
Overall thoughts?: There's a lot to improve on. Study the construction of dogs and wolves. Try to picture them in 3D in your head. Draw a lot, and get a sketchbook if you don't have one.
How much would you pay?: I'm not a huge art buyer.

Really though, the only bad artist is one that doesn't strive to improve. If you continue on your art journey and you ever feel content about your drawing ability, there's something wrong with you. If you really try to improve, you'll see these in a few years and puke your guts out.

I drew this three or four years back:
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*pukes* I think it's a lot worse than what you drew. Be sure to not get caught up in a 'style' or else the above will happen. Feel free to message me for help.



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Carlos The King (#42152)

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Posted on
2014-12-31 10:53:03
Number: 5
Whats good?: The first one is quite adorable c:
What could be improved?: Try to maybe expand more? Learn anatomy and expand to felines, birds etc to widen our abilities
What should be removed?: They should be a bit neater I reckon
Overall thoughts?: They're really cute overall though c:
How much would you pay?: hmm...i'm only going from what i've learnt from my sister...300SB for full body, 100SB for headshots~



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