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Silverstorm (#34397)

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Posted on
2016-01-04 14:44:05
RP Thread:
http://www.lioden.com/topic.php?id=304429218804
OOC Chat Thread:

(Please use this post only for signing up and questions.)

|| CONCEPT ||

A war has broken out between dragons in a world dominated by humans. Humans have begun their industrial age, driving the already elusive dragons even further into hiding. With their survival threatened, a war has broken out over who can best deal with the human crisis.

Half of the dragons believe that the great warrior Taro should become leader, so he can bring dragons into the open and demand land from the humans. Taro swears he will establish a new land for dragons, before humans take away all land in the world.
The other half of dragons believe that the young hunter Ayla should be leader, so she can find the safer location mentioned in legend. She argues that if they do expose their existence, humans will easily hunt them all down, and that they should wait for their own strength and numbers to grow before calling attention to themselves.

| | PLOT | |

Your character is one of the dragons caught in the conflict. It is up to your cleverness, leadership, or skill to end the war for your side.

| | Powers | |

Most dragons have some kind of power. They develop them at a young age, and are often realistic in nature, like being able to breathe in water or being born with frost-resistant scales. Some are a bit more fantastical in nature, like having influence on the weather, or prophetic dreams. (See rule XI for rules on powers.)

| | RULES | |
(There's a lot of these, sorry. Don't be intimidated though! They are simple and easy to remember.)
I. NO MARY SUES.
II. You cannot kill or maim another character without the player's permission. You can, however, fight them, steal from them, spy on them, ect, without permission.
III. Please do not let your characters be untouchable. Some characters should die, or have some major loss of some kind.
IIII. On that note, though, don't force drama. Don't make your sweet character act unrealistically mean just because you want a conflict, or have your character hear a fight that's miles and miles away. If you want to cause conflict, try to do it more subtly. This is a war; It won't be hard to find differences in morality or attitude. Besides that, there's a human on every corner.
IV. Hate the character, not the person. Don't take anything said in RP as a personal attack on you. This is all for fun.
V. As this will be a small RP, you can have as many characters as you feel comfortable with. But i do ask, if you have more than two characters, don't use every character in every post. If you have a character that is sleeping, let them sleep, and use another character in the meantime. This is to keep things from getting extremely crowded and static; I don't want one person RPing about 5 different characters in one post, and all of them be talking to each other. So, put short, you can have a ton of characters, but don't use all of them constantly.
VI. Although this is an odd rule, please do try to keep your characters diverse. I don't want seven hot-headed, good-hearted dragons running around. If you see a character with similar traits to yours, or a extremely similar backstory, try to edit your backstory or change some traits.
VII. Wait about two or three posts before posting again. We want everyone to have a chance to participate.
VIII. Keep fights interesting. Let your characters hit each other, trip, or even lose.
IX. On the subject of powers; Keep it balanced. Powers should be limited or more subtle. No overpowered powers like telepathy, shapeshifting, or mind control. Breathing fire, breathing ice, having venom, having fire-resistant scales are all far more realistic. If you have a more unique/powerful power, like camouflage, try to balance it out with a limit, like it can only be used when full or happy, or can only be used once a day.
X. Dragons come in all forms and sizes. I suggest you keep it diverse. Again, if you see several people with similar-looking dragons, then try to add something to yours to make them more distinct.
XI. Keep it realistic. Dragons get hungry, tired, thirsty, afraid, wounded, and sick like any other creature.
XII. Dragons know a mixture of human words like "house, gun," Ect, but also use some wolfspeak. They only know words they would logically know from confronting humans, which...Isn't a lot. I mean, would you stop to chat with a mythical creature?
XIII. If you've read the rules, put your favorite color in the "other" category of the character sheet.
XIV. Only dragon characters, FOR NOW. I may allow human or animal characters in the future.
XV. Posts must be literate. At least 4 sentences.
XVI. Cursing and gore is allowed, but keep it balanced. No long strings of cursing every post, and no extreme gore every other post, either.
XVII. Let us know if you'll be inactive.


|| Roles, Characters, and Ranks | |

TARO'S SIDE;
A middle-aged dragon who has proven his strength in combat against several tyrant dragons. His army is simple, and resides in the mountains, which has little food, but great shelter and viewpoints. Taro himself believes that dragons should not hide any longer, although it is unknown if he's willing to start a second war with humanity if needed, and if he wants land from the humans for his own power, for glory, or for dragonkind as a whole. Despite this, he has a popular following. He argues to Ayla that humanity is rapidly growing, and waiting any longer only brings dragons closer to extinction.

(CO-ADMIN IS Nyanunix |
MusicalAgony)
(This is a WIP; You can be accepted and still not have your character and name up yet.)


Taro (1/1):
Nyanunix |
MusicalAgony (#11487)


Taro's Second in Command (1/1):
Kuldristalri ("Dris")
Played by Hawkmask
(Character sheet is on 1st page)

Soldiers (1/3):
Raven (Played by ChristiCat; Character Sheet on 2nd Page)

Hunters (1/3):
Nishant
(BannanaTheLion)


Civilians (0/3):

AYLA'S SIDE;
Ayla is a younger dragon, a loner and accomplished survivor. Her army is more specialized, and she hides everyone in the rainforest, where food and reasonable homes can be found, but any kind of fighting or flying is near impossible under the dark canopy, and it lacks any strategic shelters or locations. Ayla herself believes that dragonkind is too weak at the moment to show itself to humanity, and doing so will be suicidal. She opts to wait until the dragon population has grown, and their technology, or at least, knowledge, has expanded before exposing themselves to humanity, and in the meantime, searches for a legendary hidden kingdom in the mountains. It is unknown if she really intends to ever show dragonkind to humanity, if she truly believes in the sanctuary of legend, or if she just intends to keep herself safe. Despite this, more peaceful dragons flock to her. She argues to Taro that this war will only weaken their species further.

Ayla (1/1):
Played by Davina (Character sheet is on 1st page)

Ayla's Second in Command (0/1) : (OPEN)


Ayla's Third in Command/Double (1/1):
Kade (Played by Nyanunix, Character sheet on 1st page)

Soldiers (0/3):
OPEN

Hunters (0/3)
OPEN


Spies (2/2):
Purkinje (played by Piper, character sheet on 1st page)
Muramasa "Mura" (played by Graciegra, character sheet on 9th page.)

Civilians (0/4)
OPEN








Outsiders;
(1/2)
Unnamed Male
Teddy Broosevelt




Character Sheet:

Name:
Gender:
Rank:
Age (Dragons have a lifespan of 100 years, minimum, to 300 years, maximum) :
Appearance (You can have pictures, but you must have a normal description as well!):
Personality:
Powers:
Strengths:
Weaknesses/Faults:
Other (history, siblings, likes, dislikes, crushes, mate, ect):


EDIT; From now on, a RP sample is needed. Put it in the Other section. It just needs to be a literate paragraph. It doesn't have to be with your character, but that is preferred. This is required.
EDIT; For the "Appearance" catagory, you can use pictures, but you must have a written description as well! Pictures may not load properly, or may be unclear.
EDIT; For Strengths and Weaknesses, please have more than a few traits! If you do not, i am much more inclined to reject you, since characters with only a couple traits tend to turn into Mary Sues.



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Edited on 10/02/16 @ 13:33:59 by Silver Ackerman (#34397)

Silverstorm (#34397)

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Posted on
2016-01-06 09:49:14
Wild Witchess, it's a good start! But i feel like some of it needs modifications. The backstory feels a bit...Too dark/"dramatic"? I don't know, i'm just always resistant to having a character lose a family, especially a huge family, ALL in ONE go. And overall, i feel the personality/strengths/flaws needs a little fleshing out. Just a few more traits. But it's a great start, and i feel like Tyr has great potential with just a few tweaks!



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Silverstorm (#34397)

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2016-01-06 09:50:47
ChristiCat, actually, no. Only Ayla has a third in command, and said third in command acts as her "double" as well. She pretends to be Ayla in combat, and when appearing to the enemy, as to hide Ayla's real appearance from the enemy. Taro does not bother with such things.



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Silverstorm (#34397)

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Posted on
2016-01-06 09:52:52
Nyanunix, accepted! Although, i suggest just a little more in the Strengths/Faults category!



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Nyanunix (#11487)

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Posted on
2016-01-06 09:53:58
It's always a WIP. I've never played with her before, so we'll see.



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Piper (#21479)

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Posted on
2016-01-06 09:54:38
I've finished my character. :) Though as I look now, he may be too similar to another posted while I was editing. :/



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Silverstorm (#34397)

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Posted on
2016-01-06 09:54:58
Piper, accepted!



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Christicat15 (#54511)

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Posted on
2016-01-06 11:38:06

"May the gods have mercy on my enemies.. for I will not..."
- Raven

Name:
Raven
Gender:
Female
Rank:
Warrior
Age:
146
Appearance:
Image - Head/Face is more slender and feminine-like than in the image.
Personality:
Raven is an, overall, secretive dragon, her heart sort of like a cave with the entrance blocked by rocks, meaning you have to dig deep in order to get inside the cave/heart. Raven is a very determined, ambitious, and hard-working individual. While she seems to have a coarse exterior, and it might take a while to really know her, she is a very loyal and passionate female. Willing to stand up for what she believes in, she's not normally one to take orders unless she trusts the person giving them. To some and at some times, Raven can be a very stubborn, almost child-like at times, but to others, she can be the strong leader most see slipping just beneath her surface. She is rarely stubborn and child-like, and most people know her as a... 'grumpy' person or a 'buzzkill', only meaning that she is very serious and hostile, not one to take kindly to strangers unless they prove themselves worthy. She is overly aggressive and quick to fight and, when she has the upperhand, is vicious, sometimes merciless, and cold. Despite all of these 'ferocious' traits, if she gets close to one, she becomes very protective, caring, and even loving.
Powers:
~ She can breathe fire
~ Simple fire-resistant scales
Strengths:
~ Very skilled in battle and fighting techniques
~ Very strong despite her looking slim
~ Fire resistant scales
~ Amazingly loyal
~ Cunning / Smart
~ Very leader-like
Weaknesses/Faults:
~ Hotheaded
~ Stubborn
~ Rushes into battles / situations too quickly
~ Can not breathe fire 'forever' or for long periods of time straight, she has to stop breathing it for her body to generate more
Other:
Navy - Sunset Orange - Calm/Pretty green




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Edited on 06/01/16 @ 18:54:08 by Christicat15 (#54511)

Hawkmask (#41743)

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Posted on
2016-01-06 13:06:24
Thanks! I'll start work on a backstory probably tomorrow. Might add a few bonus things too xD and I can add a rp sample if you want too



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Silverstorm (#34397)

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Posted on
2016-01-06 13:31:24
Hawkmask, all of that sounds good!

Christi, i'll have to really look at Raven some more, i'm half asleep right now. For now, i do urge to make her more...unique. I see SO many characters with the "loyal, reckless heart with a cold, ruthless exterior" kind of deal. As is, i think i'm seeing too much of a theme of hotheaded, physically powerful, reckless dragons here as it is. I mean, Kade, Dris, and Taro are all hardheaded, loyal dragons, and Eqquin has the "quiet, intimidating, vengeful guy" thing down, and that's like 4/6 of our characters (speaking of which, i kind of need a character, don't i...) I don't mean to upset or anything, but basically, i do want Raven to stick out more! She has awesome potential, but i can't approve when there are so many similar dragons about.



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Christicat15 (#54511)

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2016-01-06 13:32:39
Oh, I have been planning that character for a very long time, like I have had that personality (and charrie) for years at the least... I honestly don't think I can change her that much, though I could try if you want...

EDIT: I just checked out the other dragons bios (the ones you mentioned) and just wanted to say that I don't see THAT much of a resemblence between them, though I totally get where your coming from on the 'loyal, vicious' part, though not on the others, given the fact that Taro's doesn't mention the whole 'good on the inside' part.

EDIT 2: xD Edited...



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Edited on 06/01/16 @ 20:41:51 by Christicat15 (#54511)

Silverstorm (#34397)

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Posted on
2016-01-06 13:36:36
Hmmm, in that case, why not make a new character? I know how hard it is to change a character your experienced with, so maybe something new will be better? You have plenty of time to come up with a new character :D



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Christicat15 (#54511)

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Posted on
2016-01-06 13:44:15
Edited it lmao



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Davina {Hexa Feline
Primal} (#68950)

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Posted on
2016-01-06 13:56:16
I finished up with Ayla's app! :D
Please let me know if anything needs changed (especially the last power i gave, i thought it'd be interesting but didn't want to go overboard)
I'm also going to upload a pic soon to add clarification to the description i gave.



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Piper (#21479)

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Posted on
2016-01-06 15:13:30
@Silver/Everyone

My apologies -- seeing as my character can definitely be considered similar to some others, I am open to editing Eqquin, or even replacing him with another character, if need be.

On another note, I'll be adding some limiting factors to Eqquin's power -- I noticed that a lot of people mentioned the power limitations, and though I had some in mind, I didn't actually post them. :) I figured they ought to be shared, haha.



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Silverstorm (#34397)

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2016-01-07 07:34:10
Christicat, err...I'm not seeing the differences???

Piper, Eqquin is great! But yeah, i do see some similarities. For the record, i'm not against similarities, it's just i always recommend to avoid them, and i don't allow a lot of dragons that have similar traits to each other. If you feel like changing him, go for it! But i won't insist on him.

Hawkmask, Kadeej, i need you to update your character sheets, seeing how i made a lot of modifications to it. Sorry about that, i guess you had the misfortune of joining early XD

But everyone, particularly Kadeej and Davina, i have something to say. Both Ayla and Taro are great characters on their own; But there's an issue. I fear this is lining up to be a good vs. evil scenario. Ayla is the kind, determined leader, and Taro is the fiery, arrogant leader. Ayla wants peace, Taro wants war. I do NOT want this kind of conflict though. I don't want a black-and-white conflict here. The aim is for something a bit more morally-grey, a bit more uncertain. So...I'm not quite sure what to do here? Again, Taro and Ayla are awesome on their own, but i don't want these two being opposite leaders in the war, because it really sets up a hero-vs-villain situation, it seems. So, i guess i ask for you guys to change Ayla and Taro's character sheets (I'm thinking make Taro more selfless or modest, Ayla more selfish or arrogant, but if you can come up with something better, go for it!), or use these characters under a different name and rank, and we can give the role of Ayla and Taro to someone else??



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