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Silverstorm (#34397)

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Posted on
2016-01-04 14:44:05
RP Thread:
http://www.lioden.com/topic.php?id=304429218804
OOC Chat Thread:

(Please use this post only for signing up and questions.)

|| CONCEPT ||

A war has broken out between dragons in a world dominated by humans. Humans have begun their industrial age, driving the already elusive dragons even further into hiding. With their survival threatened, a war has broken out over who can best deal with the human crisis.

Half of the dragons believe that the great warrior Taro should become leader, so he can bring dragons into the open and demand land from the humans. Taro swears he will establish a new land for dragons, before humans take away all land in the world.
The other half of dragons believe that the young hunter Ayla should be leader, so she can find the safer location mentioned in legend. She argues that if they do expose their existence, humans will easily hunt them all down, and that they should wait for their own strength and numbers to grow before calling attention to themselves.

| | PLOT | |

Your character is one of the dragons caught in the conflict. It is up to your cleverness, leadership, or skill to end the war for your side.

| | Powers | |

Most dragons have some kind of power. They develop them at a young age, and are often realistic in nature, like being able to breathe in water or being born with frost-resistant scales. Some are a bit more fantastical in nature, like having influence on the weather, or prophetic dreams. (See rule XI for rules on powers.)

| | RULES | |
(There's a lot of these, sorry. Don't be intimidated though! They are simple and easy to remember.)
I. NO MARY SUES.
II. You cannot kill or maim another character without the player's permission. You can, however, fight them, steal from them, spy on them, ect, without permission.
III. Please do not let your characters be untouchable. Some characters should die, or have some major loss of some kind.
IIII. On that note, though, don't force drama. Don't make your sweet character act unrealistically mean just because you want a conflict, or have your character hear a fight that's miles and miles away. If you want to cause conflict, try to do it more subtly. This is a war; It won't be hard to find differences in morality or attitude. Besides that, there's a human on every corner.
IV. Hate the character, not the person. Don't take anything said in RP as a personal attack on you. This is all for fun.
V. As this will be a small RP, you can have as many characters as you feel comfortable with. But i do ask, if you have more than two characters, don't use every character in every post. If you have a character that is sleeping, let them sleep, and use another character in the meantime. This is to keep things from getting extremely crowded and static; I don't want one person RPing about 5 different characters in one post, and all of them be talking to each other. So, put short, you can have a ton of characters, but don't use all of them constantly.
VI. Although this is an odd rule, please do try to keep your characters diverse. I don't want seven hot-headed, good-hearted dragons running around. If you see a character with similar traits to yours, or a extremely similar backstory, try to edit your backstory or change some traits.
VII. Wait about two or three posts before posting again. We want everyone to have a chance to participate.
VIII. Keep fights interesting. Let your characters hit each other, trip, or even lose.
IX. On the subject of powers; Keep it balanced. Powers should be limited or more subtle. No overpowered powers like telepathy, shapeshifting, or mind control. Breathing fire, breathing ice, having venom, having fire-resistant scales are all far more realistic. If you have a more unique/powerful power, like camouflage, try to balance it out with a limit, like it can only be used when full or happy, or can only be used once a day.
X. Dragons come in all forms and sizes. I suggest you keep it diverse. Again, if you see several people with similar-looking dragons, then try to add something to yours to make them more distinct.
XI. Keep it realistic. Dragons get hungry, tired, thirsty, afraid, wounded, and sick like any other creature.
XII. Dragons know a mixture of human words like "house, gun," Ect, but also use some wolfspeak. They only know words they would logically know from confronting humans, which...Isn't a lot. I mean, would you stop to chat with a mythical creature?
XIII. If you've read the rules, put your favorite color in the "other" category of the character sheet.
XIV. Only dragon characters, FOR NOW. I may allow human or animal characters in the future.
XV. Posts must be literate. At least 4 sentences.
XVI. Cursing and gore is allowed, but keep it balanced. No long strings of cursing every post, and no extreme gore every other post, either.
XVII. Let us know if you'll be inactive.


|| Roles, Characters, and Ranks | |

TARO'S SIDE;
A middle-aged dragon who has proven his strength in combat against several tyrant dragons. His army is simple, and resides in the mountains, which has little food, but great shelter and viewpoints. Taro himself believes that dragons should not hide any longer, although it is unknown if he's willing to start a second war with humanity if needed, and if he wants land from the humans for his own power, for glory, or for dragonkind as a whole. Despite this, he has a popular following. He argues to Ayla that humanity is rapidly growing, and waiting any longer only brings dragons closer to extinction.

(CO-ADMIN IS Nyanunix |
MusicalAgony)
(This is a WIP; You can be accepted and still not have your character and name up yet.)


Taro (1/1):
Nyanunix |
MusicalAgony (#11487)


Taro's Second in Command (1/1):
Kuldristalri ("Dris")
Played by Hawkmask
(Character sheet is on 1st page)

Soldiers (1/3):
Raven (Played by ChristiCat; Character Sheet on 2nd Page)

Hunters (1/3):
Nishant
(BannanaTheLion)


Civilians (0/3):

AYLA'S SIDE;
Ayla is a younger dragon, a loner and accomplished survivor. Her army is more specialized, and she hides everyone in the rainforest, where food and reasonable homes can be found, but any kind of fighting or flying is near impossible under the dark canopy, and it lacks any strategic shelters or locations. Ayla herself believes that dragonkind is too weak at the moment to show itself to humanity, and doing so will be suicidal. She opts to wait until the dragon population has grown, and their technology, or at least, knowledge, has expanded before exposing themselves to humanity, and in the meantime, searches for a legendary hidden kingdom in the mountains. It is unknown if she really intends to ever show dragonkind to humanity, if she truly believes in the sanctuary of legend, or if she just intends to keep herself safe. Despite this, more peaceful dragons flock to her. She argues to Taro that this war will only weaken their species further.

Ayla (1/1):
Played by Davina (Character sheet is on 1st page)

Ayla's Second in Command (0/1) : (OPEN)


Ayla's Third in Command/Double (1/1):
Kade (Played by Nyanunix, Character sheet on 1st page)

Soldiers (0/3):
OPEN

Hunters (0/3)
OPEN


Spies (2/2):
Purkinje (played by Piper, character sheet on 1st page)
Muramasa "Mura" (played by Graciegra, character sheet on 9th page.)

Civilians (0/4)
OPEN








Outsiders;
(1/2)
Unnamed Male
Teddy Broosevelt




Character Sheet:

Name:
Gender:
Rank:
Age (Dragons have a lifespan of 100 years, minimum, to 300 years, maximum) :
Appearance (You can have pictures, but you must have a normal description as well!):
Personality:
Powers:
Strengths:
Weaknesses/Faults:
Other (history, siblings, likes, dislikes, crushes, mate, ect):


EDIT; From now on, a RP sample is needed. Put it in the Other section. It just needs to be a literate paragraph. It doesn't have to be with your character, but that is preferred. This is required.
EDIT; For the "Appearance" catagory, you can use pictures, but you must have a written description as well! Pictures may not load properly, or may be unclear.
EDIT; For Strengths and Weaknesses, please have more than a few traits! If you do not, i am much more inclined to reject you, since characters with only a couple traits tend to turn into Mary Sues.



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Edited on 10/02/16 @ 13:33:59 by Silver Ackerman (#34397)

Davina {Hexa Feline
Primal} (#68950)

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Posted on
2016-01-07 07:52:20
I can definitely fiddle around with the character some more to make sure she's a better fit!!! I'll let you know once i have things updated a bit more.

EDIT: I probably should have fleshed out her personality a bit more anyways, but i was in a bit of a rush yesterday and had a lot going on ( i'm getting married in 9 days! :D ) so I'll go ahead and add in some more personality to make it not so "black and white", or "good vs evil"



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Edited on 07/01/16 @ 14:56:42 by Davina (#68950)

Christicat15 (#54511)

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Posted on
2016-01-07 08:23:00
Silver, I meant i edited the reply, not the form.
I edited the one where I told you I had the charrie planned for a long time



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Silverstorm (#34397)

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Posted on
2016-01-07 08:25:54
Davina, its okay! I understand. And congratulations on your marriage! I hope you'll be happy for many years to come. Don't worry, you have plenty of time to work on her. I won't start the RP until everyone's ready.

Christi, OHHHHHH *facepalm*



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Christicat15 (#54511)

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2016-01-07 08:27:54
No, you were fine. I realized how stupid it looked, it looked like I edited the form, but I was really tired and wasn't thinking straight.. lmao



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Davina {Hexa Feline
Primal} (#68950)

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Posted on
2016-01-07 09:36:45
I've added quite a bit more personality wise, especially with some more negative traits. Please let me know if this is any better!



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Edited on 07/01/16 @ 16:49:30 by Davina (#68950)

Piper (#21479)

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Posted on
2016-01-07 11:15:41
I've introduced a new character that may potentially take Eqquin's place -- hopefully, he's a bit more original.



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kadeej (#57629)

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Posted on
2016-01-07 11:50:17
I apologize if I'm making assumptions Silver, but you keep requesting different detailed character changes without giving us much of a base to go on. The plot itself is set up good vs evil very basically as I understood it. It seems like every character that has been created has had to be changed, but if you wanted all these specific types of characters, maybe you could have created them in the first place and let people fill in those slots.



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Davina {Hexa Feline
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Posted on
2016-01-07 13:02:22
Kadeej, Silver is only trying to make sure that this is a well fleshed out roleplay with out any mary sues... and as for the plot, with anything, good and evil are all a matter of view, nothing is perfectly one or the other and adding some moral ambiguity to things just makes it more fun!



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Nyanunix (#11487)

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Posted on
2016-01-07 22:16:10
Silver is not wrong. They're attempting to ensure that not every character is just a slightly different version of the same dragon, as Dav stated. Taro is not bad, nor is Ayla. I have many different friends and all of them have different personalities; none are concretely good or evil. Snowflakes are beautiful, but so are flowers.



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Hawkmask (#41743)

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Posted on
2016-01-09 03:34:38
Added a rp sample, and a fee other things. History will hopefully be up today!



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Hawkmask (#41743)

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2016-01-09 03:34:41
Oops double



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Edited on 09/01/16 @ 10:35:07 by Hawkmask (#41743)

descriptive (#65447)

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2016-01-09 05:03:00
Name: Benedito ( "Dito" for short )
Gender: Male
Rank: Soldier of Taro's group
Age (Dragons have a lifespan of 100 years, minimum, to 300 years, maximum): 87 years
Appearance (You can have pictures, but you must have a normal description as well!): An average-sized build with small, dull gray scales and wide-spaced copper eyes. His back legs are of normal proportions and appearance, but he sports only stubs in place of what should be front legs. The cells not in his legs seemed to have moved to his set of large set of wings. This means that he often remains high above the clouds, drifting on the wind currents, and only risking the embarrassing spectacle of a sort of tuck-and-roll ground landing when absolutely necessary or to sleep. His back is slightly curved from years of walking in a birdlike fashion.
Personality: The moment he opens his jaws to squawk, a casual viewer can deduce a good bit of his personality. Dito is a well-preened peacock and takes great pleasure in yammering about his charming, suave, amazing self, to the point where he's gotten beaten up a little bit by others who simply want him to shut up. Most of what comes out of his mouth isn't true, however-- he isn't smooth ( however many bad pickup lines and not-so-sly grins he produces ) and he isn't any level of amazing. And if someone tries to point this out, he pushes down any sort of self-doubt that may eat away at him in the future by flat-out ignoring what they said. He tries to be funny, but his jokes are boring and his humor dull. He is outstandingly overconfident in himself, and being quite the daredevil he's "achieved" an enormous number of bruises. If you left him time to think about all these qualities, he'd probably explode. He feeds himself lies and is terribly alone because of them ( though he doesn't think that so ), and he values friendship quite a bit. But he's pretty set in his ways and it would take a very traumatic event to reveal the sniveling insides.
Despite these characteristics, he is very committed to his job, and even though he hates the monotony of it sometimes, he does it tirelessly. He, being a terrible judge of his abilities, combined with an incredible ( however, not blind ) loyalty to his comrades, would swoop to save someone despite the knowledge that it would most likely get him and/or the one being saved killed. Torture wouldn't get a word out of him.
Powers: The ability to see in the dark without any source of light ( ex. you can lock him in a pitch-black room and he'll see perfectly well, as if it's daytime ). This can only occur during the night, and fades with the coming of the dawn.
Strengths:
- Ability to see in pitch-black
- The internal heat of a furnace, a natural ability his kind evolved to keep warm during the cold mountain nights.
- Razor-sharp teeth
- Extremely loyal, though not blindly
- Committed to whatever job is assigned to him
Weaknesses/Faults:
- Proud and self-centered
- Loud
- Awkward
- Overconfident in himself to the point of recklessness
- Committed to his job to the point that he hurts himself overworking
- Constant aching from curved spine ( sometimes it hurts so badly that it hinders his abilities, but he ignores it and works nonetheless. It's usually a mild pain in the background to him )
- Inability to breathe fire
Roleplay Sample: Light had crept into his tightly-shut eyes. The dragon's eyes were wriggling back and forth in REM, and it was the perfect time for this natural phenomenon to have happened. Dito stirred, stretching his jaws and letting out a sigh. The soft pink greeting of dawn. If he kept his eyes closed, he could probably get away with a few more winks of sleep. However, he simply couldn't. It was time to wake up.
His wings flew open in the middle of the space where he, and to his merry lack of concern, the other dragons, slept, probably smacking a few of their heads in the process. It was their fault, anyway, oversleeping. He got to work like a worthy soldier. But he had no time to fuss about the others-- it was time to launch into his duties. He squirmed to his feet and waddled out the entrance, leaping out into the open air and soaring into the midst of the barren landscape to check the borders of Taro's domain. It was a routine he repeated painfully often, but it was part of being a soldier, and due to understanding this piece of information he humored and tolerated it.
Other (history, siblings, likes, dislikes, crushes, mate, ect):
- Benedito is an aromantic/asexual. He's still open to a platonic partner, however, of any gender.
- I love orange. Orange, orange, orange.



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Edited on 10/01/16 @ 13:24:16 by descriptive (#65447)

Silverstorm (#34397)

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2016-01-09 05:10:49
kadeej, on the black and white point...This RP is not supposed to be good vs evil. It shouldn't be easy to pick sides; Both sides have legitimate points, neither is right or wrong. That is my goal. We already have SO many black and white wars in fiction, and particularly RPs. And although that's fine, I'm more interested in something more grey and uncertain. I think it makes for a more interesting RP; it has more interesting character interactions than just fighting and romance and such. Although that will happen, i still would like for there to be more than just the obvious.

I feel like having leaders that oppose each other in a evil vs good style (Again, Ayla = Good. She is selfless, caring, and wants peace. Taro = Bad. He is arrogant, fierce, and wants war.) sets a different stage; People see Taro and immediately identify him as a bad guy, who wants war against humans. We, as humans, generally see war and y'know, dragons crushing humans, as a bad thing. His motivation is too black and white as well; Its not out of necessity, or something personal like revenge, or fear.

The thing is, Taro is actually fairly realistic. He is a good character; Fighting because you feel your people are superior and deserve more is sadly realistic. But its not what i want as the main face, the main controlling force, of one side of the war. It's not so much what i want in a character; Its more for the players than the characters, in all honesty. As repeated, i don't want this to turn into "let's all overthrow/defeat the big bad guy and live happily ever after!" because that's not the conflict. Its more about survival and what each character fights for/values. Small lil' rant over, but i don't want any specific characters, but i do want to avoid certain things. Said certain things are in the rules(a ton of similar characters) and what i just said; obvious good vs evil.

The place of Taro has a bit more responsibility than just being a leader. It has a impact on how some people may RP or make their characters. It sets an example, essentially, and it especially has impact on the kind of story this is. If he is a clear antagonist/bad guy, then Ayla is the clear protagonist/good guy. I don't know how to really explain this anymore. If you can't change Taro, then you should probably leave the role to someone else.



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Hawkmask (#41743)

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2016-01-09 06:05:30
I really like that your having it be a grey area Silver, and not just flat out good or bad. As fun as it is to play the hero or villain, its more realistic and more interesting to play someone who doesn't necessarily want or approve of what they have to do for their goal.
That's kinda what I was thinking of for Dris; he agrees that dragons need to reveal themselves and knows they need better, but he doesn't want war. He'll fight if he must, but that's only because he has to.
Its just what they think is best for their species, and thats the argument, just without right or wrong.
I don't see a lot of rps with grey areas like this, so I thank you :)



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Silverstorm (#34397)

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2016-01-09 06:26:45
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Accepted! Although, could you add some more strengths and flaws? Is he too reckless? Is he good-hearted? I'd like to know a little bit more about what works for him and what doesn't :D

Hawkmask, thank you! And that's interesting with Dris; i can't wait to see how to see how that clashes with other characters. Speaking of which, i need to finish up my character sheet, don't i... XD



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