Name:
Vincent Mercer

Sex:
Male

Age:
24 years

Description/Picture:
Vincent is very well built. While he does weigh 220, the majority of that weight is in muscle. His hair has become matted into dreads, due to living on the island. He has a scar on his left eyebrow, as well as scars along his chest, back, forearms, and legs.

Height:
6' 4"

Weight:
220

Personality:
Vincent is outgoing, and has a personality that could light up a room. He is quite a big goof ball, always wanting to lighten the mood. He never acts like he has a stiff exterior, but can be tough when he needs to be. Vincent is a big sweet heart and will do anything to help others.

Skills: Knowledgeable on flora and fauna, slightly skilled with crafting,

Weakness: Clumsy, can be overly caring, bad stamina

Sexuality:
Bisexual: Leans more towards males

Relationship Status:
Single

Offspring:
None

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Accepted, Shy!

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Name: Ashley Rose
Sex: Female
Age: 19

Description/Picture:
Height: 6'1
Weight:

Personality:
Empathetic; despite overall appearance, Ashley is an extremely empathetic individual.

Stoic; With a very careful, tight reign over her composure, she's mastered that precise somber stare, even in dire situations.

Compassionate; Ashley is somewhat of a benevolent individual, contrary to her reputation and austere demeanor. She is willing to go to great lengths to keep those under her protection safe, even if it is “weakness”

Sarcastic; Ashley can be somewhat Sarcastic at times which can be surprising to some due to her somewhat shy demur.

Over Protective; when she loves someone or something she will do everything in her power to protect them, although she may go overboard at times.

Level-headed; in (most) situations requiring her to step up, Ashley will rise to the challenge.

Devoted; Ashley is a person who will get things done. She is not the type of person that will start a project and then abandon it. When she says she will get something done it will get done.

Intelligent; Ashley is a very smart girl and tries to base her actions on her head and not her heart (she doesn’t like to let her emotions control her)

Ferocious; Although she will try to avoid situations in which a fight is required, when the time calls for it, Ashley is a force to be reckoned with.

Stubborn; Ashley can be very stubborn at times especially when it comes to protecting those she loves.

Loyal; Ashley is a loyal as they come the only was one could lose her loyalty is to betray her in which case she would become your worst nightmare.

Skills: Strong, Quick, Intelligent, Level-Headed, Devoted, Stoic, Compassionate, Empathetic, Ferocious, Loyal, Beast-Master, Weapon-Master,
Weakness: Stubborn, Over-Protective, Sarcastic,

Sexuality: Bisexual
Relationship Status: Single
Offspring: None

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I'll ask you what I did of the others. Try to keep her weakness equal with skills. I can tell she is a bit in her head by the way her personality is, add that to weaknesses. And no one is going to be a master of taming. These animals haven't been seen in millions of years. No one is going to know how to connect with them at first... I'll allow the weapon master as long as she was some sort of military figure before she got washed up.

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By beast master i meant she is good with animals as in she is naturally good at calming them (if they are already tamed) and is good at doing things that involve animals (feeding a dire wolf that didn't want to eat for instance) not just taming and if she did have the whole taming thing mastered it would only be with dire wolves and Saber-tooths as dire wolves are closest to dogs and saber-tooth is closest to cats. she would not be very good with dinosaurs (taming them and calming them) the only good thing she would have with dinosaurs would be riding them and that's only because (in her mind) it would be similar to riding a horse. and with weapon master she would be good with guns and knives she might be a bit good with a bow (aiming it at least) but she would have to gradually get used to using one (it takes a lot of callus on ones fingers in order to use a bow something she doesn't really have at the moment) I would never make a perfect character everything has to have flaws and a good portion of her flaws are within her traits and skills. (No skill is perfect) also since the people get washed up with no memory of her past life i was going to have most of her skills with weapons be forgotten so she would have to relearn them and she would only have muscle memory.

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Alright, you do not know much about the actual ice age, prehistory mammals, now do you? A dire wolf is quite unlike a simple dog in many different traits, not alone a tamed animal. Dire wolves are very dominate, aggressive and intelligent mammal. If anything, they'd be like our current wolves but much more advance. Unlike a dog, they will not submit to the 'follow the leader and help them fight' role. The only time an wolf will protect another is if they are the dominate, the Alpha. If they are an Alpha, they will not obey to any means till their rank is forced from them. I also find a quick flaw in you're 'feeding a dire wolf that didn't want to eat for instance' comment. Wolves can not be fed like another dog. The only reason why dogs can be literally hand fed was because of the slow revolution of these canines slowly getting use to eating near these humans after hundreds of years... The ones who wouldn't eat, died. See the flaw in your theory? And don't get me started on sabers...

At last, your traits still are far from even. Sense you are making her a natural animal tamer, (Which is no different than a beast master sense they are literally the same fucking thing.), also a natural born fighter, both melee as you said (Knives) and support (Guns), Fast and strong (A very rare combo, I must admit.), both a very aggressive opponent in a fight and also some sort of mental supporter, and in a way some sort of leader figure who can see flaws in 'everyone'.

Now let me explain how each skill is over powered in a way:

Natural Mammal (Dog and Cat Figure) Tamer:

Being someone who knows a lot about animals, I can see why you want your character to be in the middle of those two. But I must face the fact that not just anyone can know how to tame a wild animal, not alone something who has never been around humans in the first place. Don't get me wrong, people can tame them... but it takes more of a personal backstory for someone to actually connect and bond with these animals. I'll go ahead and use me as an example. I grew up owning a wolf, which is the only reason why I am extremely good with canines. I know the limits and what is expected. Most dog owners don't even know how to punish their animals the correct way or to assert dominance over them. Naturally, your character would have to be closely tied to the wild breed of wolves to tame a direwolf. Same with Sabers. See, Sabers are not like normal house cats... just like how normal cat owners can't tame a lion.


Weaponry Specialists: (Basically both Melee and Support/Assault/Special weapons.)

I will not accept anything as simple as someone who grew up around guns. No average joe will know how to specially duel a blade (Which can also include swords and axes sense they are not much different) and then be an excellent with both a gun and primitive bow/crossbow. I know hundreds of gun owners who can't ever shoot a bow and refuse to learn so... Plus, if she so close to animals than she naturally would avoid this type of training. Usually high military personnels are the only ones that would be anywhere close to being good with a blade, hand to hand combat and a gun. And even they wouldn't probably use a gun and a bow. They'd pick either or.



Strength and Speed AND Intelligence: (... Just pick one or two. Not THREE)

Let me try to put this as unassaulting as I can... Someone who is very focused on strength and then also works their lower body for speed wouldn't be focused on book work and the average intelligence. Literally... Me personally, I am mostly focused on intelligence and I suck at speed. I am also only average in strength.


A Warrior or a Thinker:

... Literally what I just said above and also someone who tends to be more physically expressive, meaning they let their emotions out and thoughts through combat, wouldn't be a very good emotional supporter. I can see them being somewhat intelligent but they would be very numb to other emotions. Also, someone who is very passionate with animals, (Like the first fucking reason I listed) wouldn't be a very good fighter. They either not want anyone to hurt or just kinda terrible at the total. I can see a passionate person loosing her temper... but not a fighter.


Leader:

I am not trying to bite ya about the leader thing... but you are trying to be the perfect leader type with this character. A leader is usually someone who is mentally strong, even if they aren't physically. There are two types, The mental, thinkers, planners, and support type leaders who are focused on the group... and then there are the Strong, silent, violent and fierce leaders...


So at last... Take a bit of these things out and Add. More. Weaknesses. Please take my characters as an example if ya must. Like, Issac is a nerdy, quick and flexibility person but is weak, anti social, a bit of a cry baby and not a leader figure at all. He is sick to, twisted. It tends to make him more of a messed up in the head type of character that usually just lays back and makes the plans. Jack is a go friendly, muscular man but he has no back bone for being under pressure, is not quick, clumsy, very blunt and cannot be independent enough to be on his own. Kinda see how I give them some traits but then make them lack the same useful ranking as the trait. Balance. Mine have more weaknesses than they should but it makes them a bit more like common people...

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I'm going to go back in and change around Vendetta's form. I haven't roleplay ed her enough for the changes to affect her

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Alright Shy, I do suggest you start making her interact with the group soon.

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I am going to start posting both at the same time.

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Okay form has been updated. I just went in and explained each strength and Weakness in detail. Hope it is okay.

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Shy, you were fine. I understood what you meant with your weaknesses and strengths.

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