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banooky (#61625)

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2018-04-21 20:51:37
So... I noticed February has no storyline, which surprises me because it's the "month of love", meaning many stories are just starting! As writing is one of my hobbies, I decided to make a storyline for February.

Meet the Love Queens! I call them Upenda (variation of "love" in Swahili) and Moyo ("heartbeat" or "heartthrob" in Swahili). They are travelling half-sisters from a faraway pride!
Upenda is the younger of the half-sisters. Her mother is a huntress in their home pride, which makes her a huntress as well. She's cheerful and upbeat, and is desperate for a man to call her own. She'll do anything in her power to find a soulmate, even if that means having multiple lovers at once. Upenda is flirty and a bit of an airhead, and she's mild-mannered as well.

Moyo is the older half-sister. Her mother is the Queen of their home pride, and since their shared father is the King, Moyo is a princess - something she doesn't let anyone forget. Moyo has a hot-headed temper and often demeans her sister for dominance purposes (like Vash and V'kai in May). Moyo's mother always told her that the best males are more interested in lionesses who are stubborn and hard to get, and only foolish boys would go for easier "prey" who will flirt with any lion who gives them attention. The queen convinced Moyo that this was true because if it wasn't true, the King wouldn't have married her but a lioness like Upenda's mother instead. Because of this, Moyo often tells Upenda that she's nothing more than a flashy target, and that Moyo is the one all of Upenda's boyfriends are truly after.

The storyline would be split into settling with Upenda or chasing after Moyo! Who will you choose? Siding with Upenda will give you Flirt Points and siding with Moyo will give you Slap Points... cause you'll be smacked a couple times. You could also be neutral and flirt with both. At the end of February, you could claim Upenda, Moyo, or both, the same way you could claim Wenet at the end of April. Your choices in the storyline could make them easier or harder to claim, though, so be careful!

Upenda's storyline would be helping her with Moyo's savage attitude and helping them to get along, while trying to get Upenda to break off all her relationships and fall in love with you. She will have three relationships with other males (who you'd have to fight), and if you defeat them all AND convince Moyo to leave Upenda alone, Upenda will be easier to claim at the end of February!

Moyo's storyline would be navigating through all her gossiping and royal drama as well as helping her with Upenda's "attention issues". Moyo will be a P.I.T.A, to say the least, but the more you woo her, the easier she'll be to claim at the end of February - and she's a tough cookie, so you'll need all the help you can get!

Here are my current designs for them:
Upenda would be a Romantic (Good) lioness, and you would claim her using a normal routine for a Good lioness. She would not keep her pose, but would have her own unique background that she would keep (called Upanda's Hideout or something).
Moyo would be a Sassy (Snarky) lioness, so you would claim her using a normal routine for a Snarky lioness, but you are more likely to get smacked if you went down Upenda's route or stayed neutral. If you wanted a better chance of claiming her, you'd go down her route. She would not keep her pose, but would have her own unique background that she would keep (called Moyo's Domain or something).

If you don't support, please state why so I can put your suggestions down below! Thank you for taking your time to read!

NOTE TO STAFF: I'd be willing to write the story in full, and also I will send all LD artists the wardrobe links to the girls so they can be drawn! Thank you!

Suggestions:
THIS ENTIRE SUGGESTIONS POST IS AMAZING
This one makes so much sense!!!
DESIGN TWEAKS - cherry/ardor base, lose the piebald, harsher tones for Moyo/softer tones for Upenda,
STORY TWEAKS - both lionesses function like the maneater studs, independent women supremacy
Explore ideas! OMG! you aren't the love interest, you're the WINGMAN!



This suggestion has 309 supports and 21 NO supports.



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Edited on 22/02/21 @ 07:04:56 by 사랑 kelsey (#61625)

ellu | g1 10xbo noc (#139157)

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Posted on
2018-04-29 13:57:38
maybe they could be cherry and ardor based?



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banooky (#61625)

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2018-04-29 14:15:36
I was thinking of that. Both of them have Ardor marks though so it’d be hard to tell. Moyo’s base will probably change to Manakbir, Upenda’s is Blush Rose or Cherry, I don’t remember right now.



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2018-05-04 13:23:13
Heck YAS. Support!



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banooky (#61625)

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2018-05-04 13:40:27
Thank you!



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Posted on
2018-05-08 15:33:16
Sounds like a really good idea for the Feb storyline! <3



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banooky (#61625)

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2018-05-08 15:34:01
Thanks!



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Kuweka (#37707)

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Posted on
2018-09-18 05:00:58
Support. Interesting story line, and Feb NEEDS an event alongside something like this.




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2018-09-28 14:42:23
Love the idea! They may have to lose the piebald though imo, because having so many people claim them (out of everyone who participates) would make them reallly common



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banooky (#61625)

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2018-10-01 08:22:26
Thanks for the suggestion!



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• sacred • (#154408)

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Posted on
2018-12-21 18:13:44
I like where this is heading! :o

If you would like any ideas/help composing the story, feel free to PM me! x



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timber (main)
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2018-12-21 19:21:21
Sounds great! A few suggestions, though.


The only thing I'd have to suggest is changing the lionesses' designs. Here, they show their personalities, all the while showing their half-sisterhood looks.
Upenda needs a pale, rosy, soft look like this!
Moyo needs a more harsh, purple-ish tone to her like this.
[Moyo's base in wardrobe is shown as Clear White, because her base would be purple like Anemone. There could even be a Slap Shop applicator for this base. Overall, my version of Moyo needs some harsher tones, but it was difficult to work without being able to put Anemone in the wardrobe.]



However, with these designs, you would be unable to claim them. It is just too risky to let people claim mutie rosettes. This would change the end of the event to something like:
"You and Upenda/Moyo decide to part ways. She seems to have decided her pride was more important than a frisky flirt like you. Tough luck... You hope you see her again."
With this, you could also have an explore encounter in December where you meet up with one of them. Perhaps you have some fun with her in your den ;), but ultimately have to leave her again.


Also,, what if this event was in a tropical, Hawaiian-like place? We don't have an event that is tropical and beachy. The beach is romantic and flirty... why not have it during February? This storyline pride could live on their own, flirtatious island!



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Edited on 21/12/18 @ 19:23:12 by Anika (#119472)

banooky (#61625)

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2018-12-22 15:17:56
sksksksks i love your suggestions

the designs are gorgeous, though i agree that they probably couldn't be claimed with the rosette but the december encounter is an amaziiiing idea, and the beach thing is super cute!! definitely putting those up, thank you for the suggestions!!



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timber (main)
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2018-12-22 16:01:08
aa thank you!!
I hope this post gets approved, oof.



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Styx (#163982)

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2019-01-01 03:57:32
I think maybe you could claim them, but they’d leave your pride at the end of February. They’d be in heat when you successfully claim them(you should still have a chance to fail). You can breed with them(I’m on the fence about studs since they could complicate a lot of things), but they’d have a slightly decreased chance of getting their Piebald mutation, otherwise the in game supply/demand would be ruined. They could leave your pride as soon as the cubs are weaned, and you’d get to keep one(or all?) of the cubs(if your choice), or leave as normal at the end of February. If they leave at the end of the month, I think the end chapter for claiming them should be at a time where you cannot wait out their cool down to breed and give birth again. Or, if they do give birth again, you can only chose set number of cubs or a single litter to keep. This sounds complicated but could balance the game and not have hundreds of extra pies or copies of those lionesses floating around the game. An extra limitation would be unable to use Lion Scrotes, Curmchy Worms etc so there wouldn’t be some users with a lot of their cubs or direct copies of their mothers to keep as a normal lioness.
This is my suggestion to this, but it’s a definite support from me for this idea.



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banooky (#61625)

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2019-01-01 11:50:10
actually i think i get what you’re trying to say, when i get on my computer i’ll definitely put it up there!! actually i think jellyfish should be disabled too so people can’t keep them forever? or not idk i might have to think about that one further aha



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